Reviews for in the dark
Oliviaoverlord1 chapter 1 . 4/26/2017
First of all, my god, this was a ride, a source of enlightenment, and an absolutely amazing piece of work.

I came for Iris, theres not enough appreciation for her in general, stumbling upon this fic made me appreciate her character more than i already do. Where her position in life is and the potential rage she has pent inside. The possibility of this pairing, how their history and fate line up was so intriguing to me, that even if there was no smut, i had already fallen hard for this fic with the way you wrote it.

The pacing was perfect, highlighting the few yet very important moments between them, and i smiled all the same. The way you wrote their personalities in gestures made them shine - the two always smiling children with so much unexplored potential in canon.

The writing was well too, simple yet not too basic. The afar photo moments were cute, the close heart to heart moments at the back of the truck tender, and the steamy moments full of strong passion.

I love this and hope more people read it, now you got me gushing about Prompto x Iris as if my life wasnt already a wreck.

I hope you keep writing and look forward to anymore Prompto X Iris fics you may do in the future.
AyaKagami chapter 1 . 3/27/2017
so many levels of Hot! seriously never saw the possibility of this pairing... I do now
ellaygee chapter 1 . 3/26/2017
fantastic! I ship prompto and Iris so hard lol.