| Reviews for Balancing Act |
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Guest chapter 11 . 9/12/2019 Please continue the concept is truly unique. Let Korra and Lee be a couple in this story, pretty please. See ya. |
cs2704336 chapter 11 . 9/1/2019 please make more |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 It is amazing |
Guest chapter 11 . 8/30/2019 It is amazing, good job, don't give up writing please |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/17/2019 I love this fanfiction it, you use a very good idea for it. I definitely want to see more. Please let Lee and Korra be a couple in this story i really want to see that. There are not many Korra x OC stories. |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/17/2019 I love this fanfiction and please make Lee and Korra a couple in this story. This fanfiction idea is great is all i can say i can't wait for more. |
Vyseryx chapter 9 . 5/3/2017 Hey, this is pretty nice. I like the premise very much - it is decently interesting and I am curious what will you do with it :D You are making quite a few mistakes. Mostly nothing major, but you should work on that. I advise you read some more about the dialogue syntax for starters :P [ "How do I hold her to feed her?" _s_he asked ] - |
Mogor chapter 5 . 3/29/2017 Write more Please. More Chapter. |
frostystuffs chapter 5 . 3/29/2017 Before I go anywhere in my review I wanna say this: ignore the haters. Yeah, sometimes people write stories on here that aren't absolutely perfect, but this is fanfiction... not an essay. I think you're doing pretty great so far! It can be a bit difficult to read at times, but everyone starts somewhere and grows. I'm sure you'll be great by the time this story is finished! I'm honestly not a huge fan of stories like this, but I felt the need to review after you had gotten such a nasty comment. You're doing great and I hope to see other work from you sometime! Have a blessed day! |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/26/2017 Still no proper spacing!? Basic Example: this line represents how far you can go before having to press [enter] _ theses space's represent how much area is needed so it does not look like a jumbled mess between every 2 - 3 sentences [space] [space] [space] If you cannot deal with the basics of writing then you are not fit to be here you may delete this at your leisure but take as your first genuine help/warning if no one can read this story then they will consider you not worth their time and will be removed from this site. |