Yes! I absolutely love how you put thoughts to Yona! ️ Great, great work! Keep on writing more Hak/Yona fanfics!

Although you once (probably accidentally?) broke the beautiful second person narration, the tone of this is so perfect! I adore the storytelling, the description, and how you contrast the expectations and reality, it was funny and full of emotion. I can't favorite this enough, especially in light of recent developments in chapter 137 ;) . Once again, amazing. Thanks for sharing!

cute. I like the descriptions

Gosh, this is beautiful! 3

This story was great; I loved it!

Lovely. A few grammatical errors, but overall a really wonderful, lovely piece. Would love to read Hak's POV in this style.

wow it was really good

Ah, this was wonderful, really. I loved it.
You should make a part two, maybe a "what happened next" or Hak's POV.

Great job!

A very interesting piece that puts the reader wholly in Yona's shoes. I honestly enjoyed reliving that moment in your words and loved the comparison between the romanticized and reality.

Hopefully helpful tip: Writing in second person is an exercise that needs to be fully and immersefully done. If a writer suddenly switches from second person to first or third, it ends up being more jarring to the reader than a switch from first to third or third to first. There was a section in Simple where instead of the second person 'you's there were 'she's and 'her's.

Other than that, everything flowed nicely.

Aahhh I was hoping someone was just as hung up on that scene as me~! I liked your take on it a lot so thanks for writing and publishing! Keep up the good work!

I hear you! I'm still not quite over it yet either lol.

Lovely oneshot, I liked the comparsion between her imagined first kiss and how it actually turned out. A childish girl's romantic fantasies versus the perfect imperfections of reality.

There are some issues with sentence structure and punctuation that makes it a bit confusing to read but that comes with time if you keep practicing : ).