Reviews for Heartache
GoodShipSherlollipop chapter 1 . 7/10/2019
Well, this was a really interesting “what if” scenario. I myself absolutely adore this Kind of story and have written many “what if” scenarios as well.

I liked Sherlocks reflections over pretty much the whole on screen relationship that you wrote out. It looks like you included just about every conversation between them that we saw.

I was totally thrown for a loop when John came up to the flat and short saw a Sherlock with a gun. I haven’t even contemplated that he might be suicidal, but it certainly makes sense. He really did almost kill himself over Mary and losing Molly that way, it wouldn’t surprise me at all if he decided life wasn’t worth living because she is the one who has his heart. She’s part of him and it would be even worse for him to have realized he loved her after it was too late. So that was a very nice twist and very believable.

Thank God John arrived in time to save him from himself! Very glad for the happy ending for our wonderful couple!
Helena1414 chapter 1 . 10/11/2018
i know we all want a happy ending. I really think Molly died after that phone call. Sherlock realised this and that's why he was so distressed after. Eurus said there were no explosives, "why would I be so clumsy". Molly had a bad day. I think the "I love yous" pushed her over the edge. (She topped herself.). The last scenes are very unrealistic and more like a dream sequence. Not real.
ObsessedWithOceanVessels chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
Yes! I've been waiting for someone to write this! Thanks! It's was awesome :)
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
This is incredible! I love this version. Thanks for writing.
roseokwerekwu chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
phew...you had me going there...thanks for such an awesome alternate ending
Arioneway chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
Can I possibly say that this ending is one billion percent more satifying than the open-end ending we recieved? It feels my heart with light and rainbows. Thank you so much for such gem. Cheers.
Rapunzel24 chapter 1 . 3/26/2017
This is beautifully written and brilliant. I'm a HUGE Johnlock shipper and even though this is obviously Sherlolly I loved it. Keep writing!
ladysupergirl chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
This is the fanfic I've been dying to read since TFP came out! What Sherlock would do if he thought Molly was dead and then he got her back. Beautifully done and in character. Thank you for writing this!
rem4une5r81e4581 chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
Great story :) completely believable :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
Very good alternate version of events and their possible outcome. Bravo!
mychakk chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
This so perfect. I've contemplated this very idea and in my mind Sherlock reacted the very same way, shooting the screen, ready to kill himself, etc.
Perfect.