was good until the end of the chapter their is no way the dragon-born you have made couldn't have dodged harkons attack. Keep your characters power consistent or don't make them powerful at all otherwise it makes you look stupid and unable to keep a plot without convenient bullshit.

Hey, this is pretty cool, although, in Harkon's defense he's only level 60 and he doesn't scale. I mostly experimented by fighting him with a shield and fist.

I'd love to see this finished and it would be cool to see "Alan" and that sarcastic ass Serana interact. Shit will ensue.

"Well, fuck you too." Best response.

HAHAHHAHAHA! Best dawnguard dlc fanfic EVER! I am sick and tired of all these crap romance fanfics about the dovahkiin and serena. Good work. You really did something unique here, April Fool's or not!

Oh. My. God. You got me good. I've never had the pleasure of an April Fools fanfic before. It was great! Keep up the good work!

Fake chapter or no, that was enjoyable.

"Where in Oblivion"

"YOU'LL FIND OUT SOON ENOUGH!"

I admit. That had me rolling.

Another lovely chapter. Keep it going!

Ah, positively delightful. It's always nice to kick back after a long day and read a good fanfic. Also, just curious, is Alan a werewolf? Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing if he sides with the Dawnguard or the Volkihars. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Loving it so far! This was a very entertaining read. I can't wait to see how it goes!

A thief Dragonborn is always fun simply because of how predisposed the idea of them seem to be to being a pain in people's asses. Watching the vampires get got and knowing Vex is being tormented - with love - and Maven has an immense headache was my favorite, but Karliah and Brynjolf being there was frosting to the cake. Their trinity and friendship, to me, is heartwarming.

But I always like vague interaction with a powerful entity, and Nocturnal's fairly discreet way of saying, "Alright," was awesome too. I wonder how your DB is going to interact with Isran.