| Reviews for Don't Return |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 5/27 F |
 Arko44 chapter 7 . 4/18 So Hiccup legit flew all the FUCKING way to Berk, to say the exact same thing he said on the boat! And then turn around two seconds later and leave only to miraculously get his stupid ass captured.I honestly don’t know if i want to read the next chapter as my urge to strangle you will no doubt increase. GL anyway |
| Mariah chapter 23 . 4/9 wow his identity is revealed now will berk turn around to talk to him or will he reject them and send them on their way? |
| OechsnerC chapter 23 . 4/9 Awesome update |
| izy440 chapter 22 . 4/8 Please please update soon |
| There are not names chapter 22 . 10/31/2019 It was really good till you started to reright it so that's when I stopped |
| The-real-dragon-rider chapter 22 . 10/29/2019 Just so you are aware, chapter two of the rewrite got muddled up, and is the same for chapter five of the rewrite. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 10/29/2019 I think this chapter was suppose to come before 19 (2). That one was him showing the Berkians flying with dragons...this one they just woke up |
| Dingo230 chapter 22 . 10/20/2019 That’s different from the original chapter 5... love it. Especially the intense part at the end where Kala takes over with that information. Can’t wait to read the next chapter... |
| Mariah chapter 22 . 10/20/2019 Wow Kala to the rescue. She will probably lie saying hiccup died and then Vaux came to help her? Astrid could be angry that he married a different girl. |
| Angel.girl66 chapter 22 . 10/19/2019 yes, LOVE IT. I love the original story but I am LOVING this rewrite. |
| robby21 chapter 21 . 10/10/2019 Its all good, i feel you spiritually. I also perform in a marching band. You are a good writer and i will wait to enjoy what you put out |
| The-real-dragon-rider chapter 21 . 10/10/2019 With the lack of Hiccup/OC stories on this site; I believe it's a nice take. If you could throw in some flashbacks between the two as they were becoming friends, then married and then having their daughter, I think that would be nice. Keep up the good work! |
| Mariah chapter 20 . 10/10/2019 sorry missed this chapter wow they see she looks just like hiccup wow. as for questions i left them on the other chapter. |
| Mariah chapter 21 . 10/10/2019 wow really good when will they discover that Vaux is hiccup? hope there reaction is anger since he used to be a berkian but abandoned them for a new island and maybe astrid can be mad that hiccup has a family? |
