| Reviews for Elemental Interference |
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Caesar704 chapter 2 . 2/5 I love all your work.! But can you sometime write on D Gray Man fandom. This series have some few torture target :v |
Peekabloodyboo chapter 2 . 3/3/2019 Aw, I LOVE this. 3 Perfect pick-me-up after a long, exhausting weekend. I was feeling cranky after having to cover for a colleague and losing my first free-weekend since the end of 2018, so this was just what I needed. MADE MY DAY. Really - I couldn't stop chuckling, haha. ;) So thanks for that 3 Overall, excellent follow-up to the first chapter! I'll probably never get used to saying this, but I'm really enjoying how you write Lucy's point of view. You actually make me like her….which is a feat in itself. ;) Here, though, it really set the tone for the chapter and helped build the anticipation. Nice! As for Gray and Natsu? On point, as always. The banter, the "bitch-fighting", the pranks….Christ, especially the one on Lyon. Oh my god. That was GOLD. And when you followed it up with their "teamwork" pretty much going down the drain and creating yet another flood? Goddamn, I LOVE YOU. My stomach literally hurts from laughing so bad. xD My absolute favourite part, though? That ending – Way to go Erza – she's such a devious little hellion when she wants to be. Especially when cake is involved. Haha. PRICELESS. ;) [Moved from AO3 for archiving purposes.] |
Animeloverloves chapter 1 . 2/28/2019 [Animeloverlovescats] I’m dying right now. This is freaking HILARIOUS! [Moved from AO3 for archiving purposes.] |
zephyrdh chapter 2 . 2/12/2019 Yeah, I have that impression of Erza to, its to oblivious for it to be real. [Moved from AO3 for archiving purposes.] |
Peekabloodyboo chapter 1 . 2/11/2019 Oh my god. This fic took me completely by surprise. I so did NOT see that one coming. Seriously. This was just bloody hilarious . I couldn't stop laughing. xD For one – the plot; Natsu and Gray accidentally doing an Unison Raid – with the end result being water and flooded villages? Only those two, only those two. Haha ;) Then there are those little moments throughout – the banter, the endless fighting/arguing, the other characters' reactions... Everything was just so spot-on and such a treasure to read. One of my favourite scenes is probably the one with the dark guild leader. Leave it to Gray and Natsu to end up fighting over who gets to take him out - and then refusing to let him surrender. "No way, you're our tie-breaker." Lmao. That was PURE GOLD. Honestly, your portrayal of Natsu and Gray in this piece is bloody perfect. And definitely the best humorous/comedic ficlet you've written so far. My throat hurts from all the laughing, lmao. xD Needless to say; I loved EVERYTHING it. Oh, and, that little not-so-subtle jab at Juvia? Oh my god, that was PRICELESS. ;) Thank you for this. 3 Best pick-me-up ever xD Curious to see what happens next! [Moved from AO3 for archiving purposes.] |
Slowking12 chapter 2 . 1/12/2019 This is priceless! I love it! |
Blue-Eyes-Dragon chapter 2 . 8/9/2018 Your new chapter for Elemental Interference was really funny. First they worked so good together, even if it was to play a prank, and then it went down the drain with there cooperation quite litterally XD Though it would have been interesting to see what they can do if they would have yoused that technik in actual combat... It was great regardless. And looking forward to your next work. |
Kippysaurus chapter 2 . 8/9/2018 Yes continue the Juvia shoving! Really hope this becomes a series (with more erza troll)! |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/25/2018 It may be unusual for you, but hey this was awesome. Erza the troll is the best. And poor Lyon ... The Master, then ... Lol |
R011ingThunder chapter 2 . 7/24/2018 Oh, my gosh, this! Erza is hilarious here (Gray's no slouch with his barbs either, mind you) and I love it! - Karine |
Emmahoshi chapter 2 . 7/24/2018 and here i thought that both makarov and lucy's words were taking way too literally and then come troll erza lol for once i thought he weren't stopping them so that they can work together or something but apparently everyone thinks it's april fool day or something , seeing (or reading) juvia being shoved by gray and a fictional dragon is quite amusing and i find the ice-fire mixture producing water quite amusing in that regard a it further diminishes juvia's already non existing connection to gray XD i love how blunt happy i "but you are heavy" lol what a fun chapter |
DigiXBot chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 Um, what jab? |
LizaScamander chapter 2 . 7/24/2018 Haha I’m glad this story got a second update to add to its humor, love the concept of Natsu and Gray accidentally doing unison raids and then pranking somebody in order to show off how cool it is. You understand their dynamic so well, its the stuff like this that makes your stories seem like something that would actually happen in the canon plot |
Viperhat chapter 2 . 7/24/2018 Of all things i expected to come from you it sure wasn't this. Not that i am complaining, of course. XD You know, at first i thought that this was more of a Gray-buff chapter, giving him the ability to do dynamic Ice-Make just to one-up Lyon. Then the prank happened... And it all made sense after. Though i have to say, the fact that Gray and Natsu had worked together for that long and kept it (mostly) on the down-low. It is just a shame that it was all for a prank. XD And Erza... You fucking wot? XD Your master plan was clearly more well done than that of Gray/ Natsu. Looking forward to the update, -Viperhat |
DarkWarriorProgram chapter 2 . 7/24/2018 Erza is ultimate troll. XD |