| Reviews for Fluttering Wings |
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Dranzer chapter 5 . 8/22/2018 I love the concept of the story. Please update soon |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2018 This is so muc fun to read with the Yuto alternate ending and Yuya calling out. When will you update? cuz i don't have social media and the tab for the story said its been over a year now... |
Unita chapter 5 . 3/23/2018 Aaaa you haven't updated this story since April 17 2017! Almost a year ago! D; I got so into it I just want more! I want to know how Yuzu and Yuto will deal with the outcome of the summoning! What will they think about the perfect imitation that is impossible to be created just like that and it came so naturally too! And later lets see if Yuto can recreate entertainment dueling ala Yuya, "The fun has just begun!". I'm really hoping this fic would make a comeback and you'll find your muse. :) |
Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 5 . 1/30/2018 This is actually getting pretty good. I'm guessing those last few lines indicate that Yuto absorbed Yuya and Yuya is attempting to reach out to Yuto and let him know that little fact. I'm looking forward to how that happens. Good job so far and update as soon as you possibly can. |
A random person chapter 5 . 10/3/2017 THE UNIVERSE COMMANDS YOU TO MAKE MORE! |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/16/2017 Chapter six |
SnowyStar3000 chapter 5 . 5/23/2017 Update soon please |
Oathkeeper16 chapter 5 . 4/27/2017 I loved this chapter. It was amusing to read about Yuto's experience in the Sakaki household, he made it though the day, although I think that Yoko is getting a little suspicious of him even with the help that he is getting from Yuya, whether Yuto realises it or not. I can imagine Yuto being a dog person and a found the moment with him and En to be cute. The duel with written well and I loved the moment when he Pendulum Summoned. Keep up the great work. |
felcatty chapter 5 . 4/21/2017 Awesome chapter :D Can definitely feel how guilty Yuto is having to pretend to be Yuya in front of Yoko; which is kinda sad she can’t tell the difference but guess that means the disguise worked. For some odd reason I feel like Yuzu could make a Yuya manikin with everything she’s got. Like they say every rose has its thorns, although Yoko is too sweet (now). I like how Yuto thinks about Sora’s name coming naturally like Kite/Kaito’s name came to Yuya. I was dense while watching the anime, it took me a while until I realised that En and Core were a pun on encore (the other one was Kilo/Watt right? Either way more puns). I have a feeling that Yoko is the one that names them, just ‘cause Yuya sounded slightly irritated when she brought another stray home. Now dream sequences make much more sense than spontaneous berserk moments. As a duel meant to help Yuto practice, it was actually quite smooth so far. I would love to see more Action Traps, they’re quite interesting. I know we had some, but 95 percent of the time it was spells, and when we did see them it ended up being an entire field, but that’s my opinion. I like Yuya’s influence on Yuto, it may be a subconscious play, but I find it effective in this case. Truth be told, I’ll read a story when I can, usually when it comes out if not later (thanks a lot uni), so progress to me isn’t an issue, you get it out when you get it out. I also don’t have Tumblr anyway, but feel free to PM me if you'd like my opinion on something :D A cute side series would be…very cute and adorable X3 Can’t wait for the next chapter Keep up the awesome work :D |
cybresamurai chapter 5 . 4/20/2017 Yugioh fanfics that actually have duels are my favorites this is going to be great! |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/17/2017 This is a great chapter. I like the soft-plot before hard-plot idea, because it will make the story more interesting. I like your idea putting the inside voice (Yuya's) in the end of the story. Well, in the anime Yuya's mom is strict but also pretty easy going, and you manage to input her behavior and talk perfectly. Also, I just wonder. How we're you planning Yuto's encounter with Yuya's other acquaintance and friends, especially with his BFF Gongenzaka ? And the Berserk mode? Well, that's for me! I will wait your next chapter! [This Lidya Ayase. For some reason I cannot login, probably I using another device.] |
Durbe the Barian chapter 5 . 4/18/2017 And this is why Yuto is never allowed to go undercover. This is getting TOO interesting. Keep it up, please. XD |
Frost190 chapter 5 . 4/17/2017 Sorry for the late review! Good chapter! Yuto successfully survived the day and night thanks to Yuya who has helped him without he himself realising! And Yuto as a dog person part and being licked by En was cute! I can totally imagine him being a dog person XD I don't have that much comment about the Duel since I'm still new in writing about them myself, but I think you did good writing Yuto's Dueling style that he has difficulty to hide. And the moment he summoned Odd-Eyes was superb! I don't have a Tumblr, so I prefer you put it in your bio. |
Freefan1412 chapter 5 . 4/17/2017 Great chapter. :) Yuto somehow managed to get through by avoiding and pretending and some helpful impulses from Yuya. Poor him, though, having been abandoned by Yuzu basically on the door step to the lion's cave. xd It's amazing that Yuto summoned Odd-eyes and I love how though he is trying his best to copy Yuya, his preferred use of magic cards still slips though (like that Cyclone). On a similar note, I think you managed to write the duel nicely though I would advise against letting them become much longer (maybe skip some parts via summarization? only focus on the important parts? or on Yuto's sate of mind/his mind being overtaken by the blend between them?) I enjoyed reading this chapter and i'm very much looking forward to more. :) Have fun writing! (In reply to your question...I don't use Tumblr. *Shrugs*) |
FanOfKings chapter 5 . 4/17/2017 People don't draw in the very first turn if a duel |