I hope harry and snape can come to an understanding and a friendship. Keep up the good work!

Please update soon

Harry will have many more friends.

Harry has every right to be angry.

It started off okay, but the grammar started devolving about halfway through the chapter making it difficult to read.
A lot of your verb tenses are also incorrect for their usage. For example, when he is in Flourish and Blott's, "Looking at the name that appears when he taps the file..." both appears and taps, should be appeared and tapped, as the shopkeep had already done the tapping and the name already appeared.
The grammar makes it quite difficult to read.
Also, it seems to be moving a bit fast. I get that Harry was coming out from under the influence of these potions, but I don't see how the customs he is using would be found in any of the textbooks he used.
It just doesn't make a lot of sense. The story idea is fantastic, and with a bit of polish, it could do well, but as it is right now, it isn't very good.
Keep working on it!

What happens next? Its was getting good

good story have you ever thought of pairing harry with Ichigo?

Just chose set days to do each story so one or two stories a certain day.

having the three mice on him reminds me of Gundham Tanaka and his hamsters~

Where's Hedwig though?

Hummmm... hopefully Snape behaves himself.

Lol! Nice!

I cant wait for the next chapter. I love it! Can't wait to see Ichigo's reaction to being related to Toshiro! LOL

It is interesting, but I feel that you have made things move a bit fast and way to easy for Harry. For one thing a person such as Dumbledore has a lot of political power and getting him put into azkaban would be a lot harder than you portray here.

I am not sure, but I feel that you did this so that you could move onto the Japanese setting as quickly as possible. Yes it gets us to Karakura town, but I feel you have sacrificed some of the potential drama and tension in your story to get here.

Of course Snape is following Harry! You really think the sheeple of Britain are going to leave Bumblemort in Azkaban for life?! Just as soon as Snrottimort reappears they'll once again turn to Bumblemort to save them and he in turn will tell Snape tpo force Harry to return. It won't matter if by then Harry has a wife or a hundred wives with several hundred children! All that'll matter is Bumblemorts' belief in the Phonecy( meaning PHONY PROPHECY ). Thus Snape being close enough to grab Harry and portkey with him back to England. Now I hope this updates soon. But I'm not demanding you drop everything just to do that! Update it on your schedule! I'll wait eagerly for it.