canon naruto is an complete fool who should been kill several times most of his fight he won either by pure bullshit luck or the kyuubi fight with pain kyuubi fight with moon ninja kyuubi fight all fights with sasuke kyuubi fight with kiba he farted in his fucking face and he pass out what the fuck do I have to go on. not to mention how in 9 layers of hell did he became a ninja much less hokage win he should of been kick out of the academy for skipping and pranking when he could use that valuable time to train I bet he could of got hiruzen
to train him or some scrolls . and not the mention hes a terrible father and paired with hinata of all people hes had girls thrown themselves at him throughout the series but he wants the one who beats the shit out of him that's a terrible couple right their sasuke doesn't give an shit for sakura I beat it was force on him . sakura and hinata useless in combat weak as fuck the only good thing they got going form are their looks the only good kunoichi is tenten and tsunade dissonpent she's supposed to be the strongest in the village but she's lost to fucking kabuto in the first season. I don't care what you think canon naruto was a complete idealistic naive waste of fucking space who had no right to be fucking ninja!

woo cant wait for chapter 10 ;D

Oh you will remember. Just not for the reason you think of.

It is one of the few OC/SI stories that looks like it takes care of the sinister plotting backstabby daggers & shadows Danzo & his Root in a relatively early fashion with a definite ending. Or so it seemed.

There are plenty of conflict generators in the world, there was absolutely no need to bring back such a group.

Otherwise I like the Character's progression rate and way of skill experimentation, refinement methods.

The marry sue fix it attitude is a major turn off. Kinda got bored at the originality of the MC who has mastered the chidori and ransenga before being 5yrs old.

please continue this fic.

This makes no sense at all how does getting involved with the hyuga afair benefit the protagonist at all in fact getting involved is detrimental to them because they could fucking DIE or worse bring the attention of someone like danzo or orochimaru or even just the damn hokage! I am so sick of these fix every little unimportant thing with the Naruto world fics there should be thinking how to use this to help him survive not some non isuse about bairly important side characters

the mc was using jounin level skills like nature transformation a year before joining the academy. but barley got into the fourth year.

well I guess Naruto will not be marrying Hinata in this story.

Really? It's so damn annoying how you authors love to overpower this old fart. Should've stayed dead, but it's your story and I'm only just a reader so...

Please more

The problem with you si types is you spend your mc too much time in their nappies to actually reach any whorthole plot.

Ooh, mystery guy poisons MC’s shadow clone! I can’t wait to how MC responds to this. Will he tell the Hokage about this potential threat or will he keep it to himself to avoid his suspicious movements being a subject of suspicion? How will this play into the plot? I can’t wait! Thanks for the chapter!

Hehe, cover broken.

Love the story! Finding a good fanfic with a male OC is harder then it should be.

His way of thinking is so intriguing, the mind of a scientist indeed, and a more impartial view on the world around him makes everything so much more interesting.

I look forward to the next update!

Why in the hell is your talented yet idiotic OC ignoring the obvious fact that if anyone finds out about his rasengan and chidori training his ass will be locked up in T&I faster than he can blink