Good chapter, and I am glad you had ash still get pikachu and for pairings, ash x leaf is good.

This belongs in the Anime world. Find your story under "Manage Stories" and select it from the dropdown menu that says "World: Any" in the "Category" section.

[Smart, Wise, Psychic, Aura Ash.]

Then he's an OC wearing Ash's skin as a suit. You do realize it's okay to write an OC if you don't like canon Ash, right?

Read this: fanfiction {dot} net/topic/11834/55376155/1/Capitalization-Thread

You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor. If you object to this, please take it to the thread instead of messaging me.

[Salutations!, my name is Samuel Oak, better known as Professor Oak. Iv dedicated my life to studying this worlds most interesting creatures.]

This is a mess. You need a beta reader. Start looking here: fanfiction {dot} net/topic/11834/42724996/1/Beta-Signup

Good job.

Please dont turn this into amourshipping!

(If this story has a pairing.)

Well written, but why does it have to be about he-who-must-not-be-named?

Seems like it has some real potential. I would like to see more. I wish you luck with all you have planned. Thanks for sharing. I really hope to see that alakazam

I really like this story so far. it's one of the few of not the only T-rated one(s) that ive faved and followed. please keep up the good work!

Good start I like seeing ash older and wiser and I liked seeing him get pikachu again and how it did not school him this time and I like the idea of him having psycho powers nice touch by the way