| Reviews for Validating Occurrences: A Study in Emerald |
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the grey mage chapter 3 . 7/4 I don’t understand these snippets. The first one was nice, showing daphne integrating into Harry’s life. The angel one and this... don’t really feel like they’re in the same universe. |
Anon chapter 3 . 4/25 Fascinating set of stories. I note you’ve yet to bring the Hallows into these vignettes. Given your imagination and excellent plotting, that could be interesting. Regardless, thanks for the work! |
stevem1 chapter 3 . 3/7 Three excellent short stories. |
Kaustubh Sridhar chapter 3 . 7/30/2019 would really appreciate more chapters... great work |
Notus Oren chapter 3 . 6/10/2019 For a hot minute I thought that was going to be the origin of the Flickering Man |
Canuto-90 chapter 3 . 6/5/2019 Another great work! Cheers |
Canuto-90 chapter 1 . 6/5/2019 So it seems like I had forgotten about this ff. Now I remember reading this one too... I hope you will update this soon. Cheers |
Jestrbob chapter 3 . 4/9/2019 This snippet leaves more questions asking than it answers. Harry still has the time turner? He needs to find the Miss Chang in the future so she can die in the Past? An puzzle wrapped in a paradox? But I did enjoy it. |
Therio chapter 3 . 2/3/2019 I really enjoyed these little shots. I was quite surprised with the ending of this one, as it seemed it was going to be the origins of The Flickering man. It is too bad you have not updated this story in almost two years, and seemed to have bowed out of the Fanfiction writing a year ago, or at least on this site, your stories are quite good and very engaging to read. |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2018 I really enjoyed this universe overall and this chapter was great too, but I was disappointed at the end when the nameless man wasn't the flickering man. It was so perfectly set up with the time travel, his madness, being back in time, and pulling infinitesimal units of time from his future that I was sure my suspicion was right... And then it was unrelated. |
SnuggleKitten69 chapter 3 . 7/31/2018 I can, in my mind, imagine the music that plays whilst the credits roll on this final scene. Something akin to "Extreme Ways" or perhaps something energetic from Vangelis. Regardless, an excellent portrayal of your Harry - protecting the woman carrying his progeny while destroying, albeit humanely, a source of great danger to her and everyone else. Thank you, once again, for sharing your gifts. |
SnuggleKitten69 chapter 2 . 7/31/2018 A truly magnificent, imaginative, titillating chapter. A visually-compelling, extravagant telling. Thank you for sharing. |
SnuggleKitten69 chapter 1 . 7/31/2018 I am genuinely fond of your gifts of glimpses into your world. Thank you. |
scotsoe chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 Wow, I thought the original was good but this is incredible. Especially the second and third chapter I just couldn’t stop reading. They were more interesting than most fully-fleshed out fanfics I’ve read |
Toebang chapter 3 . 5/10/2018 I support this. Toebang |