Reviews for Harry Potter and the Starship Gryphon
devil556 chapter 8 . 6/22
please update story soon.
greg1becca2 chapter 8 . 7/23/2019
I like the idea of your story but you're doing pages instead of chapters
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 3/30/2019
question: why is speech in bold? normally bold speech is used for yelling
Ghost Dragon Master chapter 9 . 11/9/2017
So who is Harry's love interest? What is taking the SGC so long to contact Avalon? How will the war with the Goa'uld go? Please update soon!
Hikari Nova chapter 9 . 8/15/2017
Very interesting so far
Hikari Nova chapter 3 . 8/15/2017
I got to ask what's with the speaking being in bold? Normally bold speech is shouting
Edocsiru chapter 4 . 7/31/2017
so... plain.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/19/2017
Good concept, but lacks depth
Ep chapter 8 . 4/18/2017
Excellent Bonne continuation
Ep chapter 7 . 3/29/2017
Sympa
comodo50 chapter 5 . 3/5/2017
The origin of that ship is of your making, or will reference things such as: SW, Mass Effect, Stargate, etc?
Philosophize chapter 5 . 3/5/2017
Why is all the dialogue in bold? It's distracting and makes the text harder to read.
comodo50 chapter 4 . 2/28/2017
Q:
Weren't the Patils supposed to be from India? Or do you mean that by asian features?
Pietro99 chapter 4 . 2/28/2017
OK, an interesting start with a lot of potential. Missing a lot of colour so far, so much room for improvement. If you don't know what I mean by colour, ask and I shall explain ;-)
Iceless Plain chapter 1 . 2/24/2017
Someone was inspired by my story!? :O Yaaayy! :D
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