| Reviews for Master of Defense - Harry Travels |
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amk41196 chapter 7 . 10/19 I know this story hasn't been updated in years.. but I hope you do...tc |
chorch chapter 6 . 2/26 This is a very good story, I hope you continue this at some time. |
Helily chapter 7 . 1/27 This is an exciting and fun MoD story and I thank you for writing these 7 lovely chapters. Will wait patiently to see if you ever want to write more in the coming decades. If not, well, thank you anyway. I enjoyed these 7 very much. |
Jestersky98 chapter 7 . 10/24/2019 How could the basilisk be loose without Tom there to release it? |
chorch chapter 7 . 7/29/2019 It is alive? Please continue this story! |
TheShortMuffin07 chapter 7 . 11/27/2018 Please continue this story! It’s so good! I love the way Harry is represented in this story and I can’t wait to see what happens next! |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/18/2018 update soon |
Kingdark chapter 1 . 4/14/2018 Yes, there are problems with your grammar and spelling in this chapter. For example, you need to end every sentence, or rather every dialogue with a period. There are very few (if any at all) exceptions to this rule. But writing a dialogue like this "I'm saying you have lied" is wrong. "I'm saying you have lied." is correct. |
PappyOldGuy chapter 7 . 2/11/2018 Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted. Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing. |
Isebas chapter 7 . 1/7/2018 Wow I have really enjoyed this story so far. Although I would have liked to have seen some more of Harry's travels. I thought everything was going to be okay with the diary captured but then, snap, Mrs. Norris was petrified. Looking forward to more. Isebas |
bigfan22 chapter 7 . 10/3/2017 Well done. I'm def enjoying Harry as a professor, and I look forward to seeing what changes happen with his presence. Great job and I hope we get another update soon. |
Fireguy892 chapter 1 . 8/19/2017 please update |
diceman111 chapter 7 . 8/7/2017 great read I hope you continue |
A chapter 7 . 6/8/2017 This is a great story. Please update soon. |
Calebros chapter 2 . 6/10/2017 So let me get this straight. He goes to take an exam and he doesn't even bother to actually read about this new world? What if they use different spells or the ones he uses have different effects (an extreme example: the stupify is actually the killing curse here). What if they ask him about something during the exam and in his old universe it/he/she never existed. And so many options. |