| Reviews for Living for You Only |
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valie france chapter 7 . 11/3/2018 MAGNIFIQUE , MAGIQUE ! c'est si beau , cela fait glisser les larmes sur mes joues . L'AMOUR est si puissant ... MERCI de tout mon coeur pour ce chapitre entre REN & KYOKO |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/21/2018 Yes, a sequel! Hopefully the reactions of the people around them will be shown in there |
None chapter 7 . 4/20/2018 This is not enough so please ,I want to read Forever Yours. Onegai shimasu,Arigatou authorsan:) Yoroshiku |
Grayladywolf chapter 2 . 12/24/2017 It's amazing the tricks your mind can put you thru. Self guilt can cause a lot of damage to your mind and body. I'm glad he has Kyoko to stay with him. He really needs her. Only she can mend the damage,cause she's been thru it herself. Great job so far. Keep it up. |
Ashenvale chapter 8 . 5/31/2017 I can't wait to read forever yours. |
CamogianGrl chapter 7 . 5/31/2017 Loved this story! Thanks for posting! (Won't read the sequel bc too sad). |
Crazy4Animation chapter 6 . 5/30/2017 Thank you so much guys for taking your time to read the story and leaving your encouraging comments and reviews. I'm so grateful to all of you. Bundle of thanks for your support. Your suggestions have been noted. I'll try my best to improve :) See you next time for the sequel |
Crazy4Animation chapter 1 . 5/30/2017 Thanks a lot lady graywolf :) All mistakes has been corrected :) |
ladygraywolf chapter 8 . 5/30/2017 Thank you for a wonderful story. Looking forward to the sequel. |
ladygraywolf chapter 7 . 5/30/2017 caress/ to stroke gently or lovingly. creased/ to crumple, wrinkle, or crinkle. |
Crazy4Animation chapter 8 . 5/30/2017 sara If you don't like such stories dear then simply don't read :) I don't post direct mature rape scenes. There are much more mature stories posted here then why only discouraging my stories? |
sara chapter 8 . 5/30/2017 I don't like the story in which Kyoko or other females getting raped. |
A Musing Brunette chapter 7 . 5/29/2017 You should follow this up with a sequel. I do have some advice for you, though. In this chapter you kept repeating how Ren believes he is so guilty and unworthy about 4 times and the same with Kyoko reassuring him that it wasn't his fault. That was too much. They had already discussed that in the last chapter. Doing so once more in this chapter would be enough and they should have moved on from that. Ren could have just gone on to tell her his entire past about the high expectations of being Kuu's son and the bullying he endured because of his heritage, how it made him bitter and dark. How all of it lead to him being a trouble maker, turning to drinking, womanizing and violence and how Rick was the one to help with all of that. Or you could have just summarized how Ren just told her it all and left it open for a sequel. Either way, a sequel would be appropriate and if you choose to do so I'm sure we'll be waiting to read it. Thanks for sharing. |
paulagato chapter 7 . 5/29/2017 HERMOSO! |
sara chapter 7 . 5/29/2017 Really enjoy the last scenes. Thanks for your story. |