Wow. This was so amazingly put together! The pacing and the flow was really well done. The tunnels in the ministry! That's really creative. (I think I might steal that idea... 〜()〜)

Maybe in future chapters that you should include a problem or a character death. It'll make the fic more realistic as they're in war time. Also ending it with Percy fighting at Hogwarts and maybe the aftermath? Idk if you're gonna go through with Fred's death but if you do, maybe having a scene where some (or one) of the Weasley's are angry at Percy (thinking that he did nothing to help) and Percy doesn't defend himself because he blames himself about Fred. And his friends sort things out.
(I'm kinda a sucker for angst (as you can tell) so my suggestions are all a bit doom and gloom.)

Loved this fic! So interesting and \(o)ﾉ
Thanks for posting it! Have a good week!

Really like this.

I hope you're going to continue!I love your writing stil!

Wow. 43 more chapters and requests for new stories? Sounds like we have a lot to look forward to. I'm not sure about requests right now because I'm too busy enjoying this.

I really like how you gave the POVs of one of the former prisoners here. They are just kids and the Ministry made their lives absolute hell for a long time, so it was bound to damage them and even make them wary of new people who are trying to help them. Lol at Oliver's comments here.

Percy's luck is continuing to hold out and it seems like no one has suspected anything. Has he been drinking Felix Felicticious (the luck potion, can't remember how it's spelled to save my life lol) or something? Lol

You left us with quite the cliffhanger. I am especially interested in Percy's role. How will he keep his role secret from the ministry?

I think you have done a great job with the pacing, not too fast or slow.

Rise of the Guardians im begging you
also the Hound of Rowan (or Impyrium), Magestirium series and the seven wonders series!

Great chapter! With everything Percy can do I wouldn't even be surprised if it turns out he is an animagus.

Even though Percy might have wished to change his actions, it was the one thing that probably protected him from being suspected. In the end I think they will understand.

On another note, I was wondering if we will be hearing about Harry and his friends on the side either from the other freedom fighters or the ministry.

The window was quite the oversight, though I imagine with the stress of everything going on it is not a surprise Percy overlooked a detail.

I am glad they have new allies for their plans.

This is a bit of a sad chapter. It is not surprising he suffers from nightmares.

It was interesting how you incorporate muggle aspects into the story. I imagine the downfall of the death eaters would come partly because they underestimate the potential of muggle technology, as they consider muggles inferior.

Interesting start!

That's nice! Update soon!

Umbridge is truly the biggest idiot they have at DeathEater and Muggle/born Hater Ministry. Percy might not even have to worry about his cover getting blown. XD But at the same time, I have this weird curiosity to see what would happen if Percy was found out to be helping the Muggleborns.

Makes sense that Percy had a rough time with Divination. Like Hermione, he would rather just have the facts! Lol at him making up the dreams and accidentally popping into his dad's office through the tunnel! Asperger's Syndrome? It honestly sounds possible for Percy.

The escape plans have gotten ridiculously complicated now with all the steps they have to take for each transfer. Not to mention the danger of getting caught. I hope they can keep this up...

I love the tunnel idea. I also like the personal details, like Percy possibly having Aspergers and being a genius. The way describe him reminds me of Sheldon from Big Bang Theory. Haha! I love him! The Athsma was an interesting addition, though I’m not sure how he would have gotten an inhaler unless of course the wizarding world has there own version. Which would be pretty cool.
Anyway, excited for this mission!