Reviews for Do Not Falter
Aramus13 chapter 27 . 5/11/2019
Found this story a bit back and decided to finished reading it, and all i can say is ... Wow! What a journey!
Dragon age and Mass effect, combining two of my favorite game and the resulting adventure is awesome!
I love how Trev ability as a Templar affect biotics ( antibiotics hehe). And her going through withdrawal syndrome of Lyrium is realistic. Furthermore, her adjusting to a new world is endearing. Best friends to Shepard , Miranda , and EDI, unconsciously becoming a solid foundation to the team.
And that ending... Sorta reminds me of when i first completed the mission, so much death... I miss them already, Jacob, Kasumi, Zaeed, and Gardener that funny cook. At least their death is not in vain, taking out the Collectors.
I'll be sure to check out the Sequel later on.
10 / 10 ratings from me!
Guest chapter 16 . 10/7/2017
Uh you realize that Vasir has a Shield generator right? Also No just no, you had her Stopped in Mid Charge? that's not gonna happen considering how fast you move during those things even if if she was stopped that wouldn't stop the momentum that she's built up.
Guest chapter 26 . 8/3/2017
great story, thank you for your hard work
Wom1 chapter 27 . 7/23/2017
Ive been really enjoying the story. espessialy the banter shepard has with everyone. As for deaths, zaeed was that grumpy old grandpa that always had grenades for Halloween though he never showed up much so oh well. Jacob was also meh except for thr impact it eould have on kasumi. as for kasumi, i have no ideia why you killef her off espessialy if you didn't like it. For instance thanr is dying soon anyway, and i dont remembber samara showing up in the third game unlike kasumi.
DylantheRabbit chapter 25 . 7/18/2017
Okay so I'm vacillating between wanting to give you a big hug for writing such a brilliant story about my two favourite ever gaming franchises and wanting to kick you in the un-mentionables for making me want to spend the next two weeks playing them again. I do have my own writing to be getting on with you know.
Awesome fic though, can't wait to get stuck into the sequel.
Argh! More distractions.
I hate you. Kind of love you too though.
DtR xx.
Alexander1a chapter 25 . 6/27/2017
Such a pity about Kasumi...
Awesome chapter and awesome story. Thank you for sharing it. And your Shepard is hilarious!
Ragna chapter 26 . 6/20/2017
I was wondering if you will do more simular fic. By that I mean oc or character from another universe going in Mass effect 1( since the character will be in the first game and would be in the others, it will be AU fic and Trev's adventure will not be there) or Andromeda.
zdogg1313 chapter 26 . 6/20/2017
Looking forward to the sequel!
jerseydanielgibson chapter 26 . 6/20/2017
Looking forward to it
Grand Cataclysm chapter 26 . 6/20/2017
YUSS! More! :D
koseta.a chapter 25 . 6/15/2017
So are you to follow Trev and Miri or just jump streight into me3 cuz I think it would be fun to follow them on their way to me3 and even during
Wom1 chapter 1 . 6/13/2017
Shouldnt this be in the crossover section?
bluemarlin chapter 25 . 6/13/2017
Excellent chapter. Looking forward to the further adventures of Miranda and Trev.
jerseydanielgibson chapter 25 . 6/13/2017
Red vs. Blue in the Shadow Ship of Love?
jerseydanielgibson chapter 24 . 6/13/2017
Wow. Bet there's a ton of people that want to kill you for killing Kasumi. But then again, loyalty doesn't ensure survival or success.
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