I cant wait for the rewrite 3

can't wait for more.

I know the book this is inspired by and I can see the differences and am enjoying it so far. Cant wait to read more.

any chance of an update?

Part 2 of my review on chapter 4:

Okay so I just saw some of the reviews and maybe you can write the parts from the other fanfic more different with more originality so it is not almost directly copied or you asked the author for direct permission for those scenes and name her also in the discription. Because you quite clearly did copy some parts (even if your going in a different direction) and that is illegal and your story can get taken town for it. Your best shot would be to change the copied scenes and be done with it (if you are still interessted in writing, because you still have a lot fans out there)... ;)

PS: I could not post another review on the different chapter 4 so I had to post it here...

I have read the story this was inspired from and although I wish you would have made it more clear, that it is only inspired, I can already see that it turns into a different direction. I like your twist. I know it is almost a year but maybe you still has the will to continue? I would deffinetly like it and already follow your story. So please continue because here is a new fan for you who will give lots of motivation and love 3

Hay por favor actualiza pronto me mata la intriga de saber cuando Nik y Harry hacen el ...

Good plot, grammar needs a lot of work. Your story is a little jerky, and I've seen several holes in your work, but it isn't too bad. Just keep working, working, working! (Sorry, had to do that. Little sibs been watching that waayy to much.) I'm looking forward to your next update!

Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it

Love it

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aww please update soon

This story is incredibly similar to another story called Radioactive. It had an OC and a panther animagus instead of Harry, but the events are overwhelmingly similar.

Update sssssssssoon

I really don't appreciate it when someone copies from me. This is NOT okay.
This needs to be taken down.