Okay chapter. I thought it could've been better but it was still good.

Nice. I liked the story overall. ~Envy.

Carlos, before you do rash decisions actually TRY TO TALK IT OUT WITH SOMEONE!¡

This was so sad and so good that all those mixed emotions ain't healthy! I was about to sleep when your story appeared here, so thank you very much for keeping me awake (I mean it, in a good way) :)
And now I'll read your other stories because I love how you take Carlos in them.