Not bad very good

awesome story plot but bad grammar

Awesome chapter, and awesome story so far. A Hanataro/Soifon/Yoruichi threesome, I'm definitely looking forward to that.

Hanatarou is such a lucky bastard, now i would give anything to have some wild sex moment with Youruichi, we know she is going to get on that too.

O_o I was not ready for this...

do Kukaku and Rangiku with Hanataro

Hanatarou got a wild woman haha.

Oooh somone a little eager

Oh dear god...

Four girls I would like to request: Nozomi, Bambietta, Sode no Shirayuki, Haineko.

Nice story. I hope Hanataro gets to bang Orihime. I've been wanting to read a story about Hanataro doing it with Orihime for a while now, but I can't seem to find that many. Well anyways, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story and seeing what you do with it.

interesting story so far.
hmmm i dont really care who is with who as long as there is "plot" ;) and as long as momo isnt banging ichigo or hanataro

really interesting story so far, the chapters need to be a little bit longer though

Toshiro sure need some love from those huge tits

Well good concept but you showed double check to make sure you use the proper words or they will take away interest in your story.