Hilarious!

Great, as always:) I like how you included Tom in Dumbledore's reminicing. It makes me think about how much that poor man has to think and worry about everyday. I suppose that's what the Pensieve is for. I think you're running out of characters... Moody, maybe? Or one of the Weasly's.. they knew the Potters. Petunia is another possibility. Well, I hope my suggestions help!:)

that was really good.
what if you do harry's pov?

nice chap please please read my stories alright: I hope you dance; Once a marauder, always a marauder; Heirs of the past; Things are not always what they seem -(Erin)J.E.A.

Hello-

Well, I definitely enjoy this fic very much. It is not often I read good POVs about the deaht of James nad Lily. You're Snape was very good, and I particularly enjoy the very end. It seemed like something Snape would think.

And yes, I'm a Remus/Tonks shipper, and so it was nice to see that little moment.

Well, wonderful job with this!

-Scarlet11

Very nice _! I lurve the Tonks/Lupin moment because... yeah... I'm a Tonks/Lupin shipper :X. Sque :D! But yeah, the entire thing is completely wonderful :B. Perhaps you could write the POVs of McGonagall, Dumbledore, or Petunia Dursley? I really like the whole switching of POVs thing :D!

Aw! That's so nice! I mean, the dying thing isn't, but the wording and stuff... ok, I'm writing myself into a corner. Anyway, I totally love this one. I always wondered how Remus felt about all this; I mean, he's been "the last one standing" since that night. I like the Tonks/Remus thing too; I think it would be sweet, but Remus is like, 37 and Tonks is 21, so there's a bit of an age difference. Anyway, lovin' it! I think Dumbledore's POV would be cool, and you get to play with all his fun quirks and vocab!

Lol glad im ur hero! Hmm. How about you do...Remus's POV? If you talked about the way he thinks Pettigrew is dead, and Sirius betrayed them, (coz he never actually relalises this until book 3) or you could do Dumbledore's; how he feels it is his fault, and his thoughts on how he has to deal with lil Harry.

you could do Remus' point of view but I'm sure you already thought of that! hm... what else? er... how about some deatheaters, or... Hagrid... or... the dursleys! hey that'd be original, well for it to be interesting you have to do it as the next day when petunia found Harry but ya, there's some suggestions! Very good chapter! post more soon!

This was good, hell, the whole fic was really good.

I totally adore this chapter!:) It sounds just like Snape! You're really good at capturing people's personalities. "cantankerous" Best. Word. Ever. Hee hee _! Anyway, how about doing Dumbledore's point of view?

wow this is such a good idea! You have some real talents here. I have a minute suggestion, or perhaps it is a request. Why dont you try doing Snape's POV on his thoughts about the Potter's deaths? I mean, he hated them, but in Harry's 1st year, he was in debt to JAmes for saving his life in their 6th year, so perhaps his POV would be interesting. What do you think?

Rosie.

i cant believe u knocked my best friend off the no.1 spot!

i've only read ur 1st chapter and it seems good so she'll be really angry. never mind

i'm gonna go and read the rest of the story now

bye

plz review my fanfic its commin out on saturday 7th

O! Scary! I really like this fic!:) Will you do Peter(that little...*insert explicative here*) next?

I can't really think of that much critisism. How much hair does Harry have? You said he had "a messy mop of hair" He's only 1! Oh well, I like it, are you going to do Harry's pov, that would be interesting. Good Job!