That's hands down one of the vilest cliff hangers, I've seen on this site. Makes me very glad I'm so far behind in this story, but I had to say well done sir; you cruel bastard lmfao

Sam: one boy with brown hair and one girl with pink hair. Their names I'll leave it to you.
Mira: Two girls with mixture of pink and white hair

I still wait when Irene (how Erza will react with her mother being one of Natsu's companions), Dimaria (it will be really cool for her and Cana as best friends and members of the Dragneel brotherhood) and Brandish to enter the harem as Ultear and Sorano are already there. in the brotherhood I really want to see when Natsu comes back (I envy him)

Ahhh this felt great to read again after so long! Felt like I was reading the entire story for the first time! You did great in fixing the original mistakes in this chapter. Great job!

Honestly it irritates that way a little Erza.K wants to play tough, and annoying that she always wants to look like the badass without feelings.

you know I've seen this fic a few times and always scrolled past it, it seemed a bit too out there as far as cross overs go, I mean I've always loved both gears and fairytail. today I thought sod it I'll give it a chance, glad I did this is an awesome first chapter, I think im going to look forward to reading this!

For Natsu and Ultear it would be interesting if they had a daughter by the name of Ur in honor of her mother, already with Cana it could be a girl with the name of Cornelia.
But with Sam it would be nice if it were a girl it would be nice if she got softer after being a mother, both she and Erza.K (the other I don’t even talk about because they’ll certainly be loving mothers.
Ps: I hope we have a little Azuka with green hair and pink arrows.

great and depressing chapter.

Loved this little chapter! Feels nice to read this after coming back from a four mile jog with my sister. Can’t wait to see what you have for us the next time you post!

I would put in names for the kids buuuuut... i suck at naming things...

As always, good work. Good and plentiful action scenes, I feel bad for them. Things get worse and worse at every turn.
Possible children:
ErzaA daughter with spiky scarlet hair, possible names: Maria, Venus, Pyrrha.
Miratwin sons with white hair and mismatched blue and onyx eyes, possible names: Dante and Vergil (yes, I know, not the most original).
Biscaa daughter with pink hair, possible names: Artemis, Ellie, Alana.
Canaa brown haired son with slit green eyes (from having a dragon slayer father) has, names: Agni, Blaze, Seraphim.

Nice, plenty of action. Sucks the situation is just getting worse, but I find it fun to see. Good work like always!

Cool chapter, liked the battles and overall feel.
Looking back, “Man Whore” is arguably the best insult for this Natsu I’ve seen yet haha!

Question: wouldn't the Locust's decision to cause a dimensional blockade thanks to the seeders eventually bite them in the ass? Seeders block long range communications and prevent dimensional portals from working, so does that include the portals used by the Locust? Because if that's the case, then Myrrah will discover will discover the hard way if she decides to cut her losses on Earthland like she did Sera and try to go to another world to conquer it, only to discover that the very thing that keeps Natsu and others allied to him from returning to his world is also what keeps her from leaving Earthland.

describe the locuses because not everyone has seen GEARS OF WAR too.

one thing i can say for you to use to improve is not so many onimonipeas or sound words. the words like BRRRRRRRTPPPPPPP! draws attention away from the scene and breaks the reader's focus as they try to imagine the scene.
describe the action or the sound and allow the reader to imagine and emirse themselves in the sounds and actions of the characters. describe the scenes with the senses. ex: A steady rut tut tut of the muncher as Nutsu pressed down on the trigger. His breath was steady as his bullets tore through the grinders thick hide.
it adds to the depth of the scene and allows the reader to visualize it.