love this please continue! I love the way you write. There's enough detail that I'm completely immersed in the story.

I would just like to say that this is a nice story you've got here.

Whether you continue this story or not, I don't know, but either choice is alright (though personally more chapters would be nice). If you do continue, there's many ways you can go and I'd be very interested in seeing where it ends up, yet ending the latest chapter with Dipper choosing to always have Mabel's back is a sweet ending.

Either way, good work and I am interested in seeing what else you do, whether or not it is this story or your other.

Hey there sorry for my other review and sorry if my english is not so good i'm from Mexico but i really like your history what about if you write te third part when the guy Scott go for Mabel and try to hurt her or something Dipper can come and save her, that probably can stick together the twins again you know like brother and sister Mystery Twins it's just a idea but I hope you thinking about and I really really hope that you can understand what I'm talking about congrats you are a great writer c:

Hey there sorry if my engl

I enjoyed this chapter very much!

When are you going to update? It's a terrible thing when an author gives up on a story, I have waited so long. You are amazing at writing and I want to this story continue. It has brought so many emotions just from reading it. I love it! Please continue!

This story almost brought me to tears! Update soon!

I enjoy this. Kudos. Have a cookie .

Really good story. I'm excited for continue.

good chapter

Technically, they would have wheeled her out, but anyway you respectfully approached this topic. If you know more about it...I think you should continue this story for anyone else who needs it.

It's a sad thing for these people to be put through, but it's sad anyone goes through it. Let's encourage some green dots in here.

Hi! Do you remember me? x) It's been like, 2 years since I first read one of your stories and I'm still obsessed with everything you write. Really, you never disappoint me. All your stories and characterizations are so flawlessly written that I don't even know what to say, I'm speechless. This one in particular is really..touching I may say. It's a sensible subject, yes and I love the way you handled Dipper and Mabel's interactions, Dipper being the over protective brother we all know and love, who is also enfulged with rage, but who could blame him, really? I hope that jerk of a boyfriend ends up in jail, to be honest. I can't wait to see where this is going and I can't wait to read the next chapters of your other stories as well, even if it may take a while :)

You're welcome and thank you for the sound off. Just so you know, I really do like this story and I'm going to be interested to see where it goes from here.

Having helped a couple of people in similar (though thankfully not identical) situations as what Mabel is going through, I think you've written her very well. It shows that while she has still some immaturity/innocence remaining, she has also grown up to the point she doesn't see the world through rose colored glasses. Likewise, Dipper seems to have fallen well into the role of defender without falling into the role of savior. That's hard to pull off sometimes. If you need/want a better explanation of what I mean, feel free to pm me on that one.

Things are going to come to a head on this story eventually and I like forward to seeing what happens. I dunno what Dipper and Mabel's parents will do when they find out, but gods help Scott when Stan and Ford do; because nothing on this planet will be able to.

This Story is Amazing and also a lot different and emotional than your other works...
I really like that you always focus on the twins relationship being that close and all...it is really well pot rayed and detailed and that is what I extremely love about your stories!:)
I think this plot is going to be interesting and I am looking forward to read a lot more chapters of this but also don't forget about the other stories of yours!;)