I love it! This is an amazing story. XD I hope you do more of these too. I love them so much. 3 3 3

I can't think of any other way to describe it, but your writing had me react whenever Johnny did lol. For a quick read (I finished this in a couple hours) with the epilogue still left, I am very pleased. Can't wait to get to the next chapter!

P.S. Johnny's my favorite character btw, made me laugh when I imagined Ash standing up completely just to kiss him.

nice

you do say "icy blue eyes" a lot tho. otherwise, great story!

I LOVED this. Its so sweet and catches both their personalities well. The best fic for these two Ive read by far.

I know its crazy and that Ash told him that he couldn't get her pregnant, but you didn't really have her explain why to him since he was so shy at first. I mean what if you did a chapter where Johnny asked her about starting a family and she explains to him why it couldn't happen?

I mean I've never heard of certain animals not being able to give birth to other animals of a species I mean you have Ligers and some other things. . . but does that mean that Ash and Johnny in the long run couldn't have kids of their own? I don't think so. . . I actually would love to read a fanfiction about that moment in their lives. Even if you ultimately think about them adopting a kid anything to show how good of parents the two of them would be would be an awesome thing to think about.

That was written nicely and I enjoyed it~ Thank you for writing and sharing!

What did she mean he can't get her pregnant?

I loved it! I have been particularly fond of how you analyzed Johnny's father's and Mike's characters to write how they'd act in that particular situation. If I had one piece of constructive criticism, it would be to make the thought deeper in the first few paragraphs. But other than that, every thought and bit of dialogue were virtually flawless.

You are supernova when it comes to writing romance! Just reading it, I paused and found my myself teary and shaking. You MUST write your own romance novels!

Not only this chapter, but I adored the whole thing overall! The way you could turn side images from a boring kids' movie into something this beautiful and compelling is simply incredible!

Great epilogue seto! Well I'm really happy for both Johnny and Ash that both are much more open to makin love and they even tried new positions and it was so much better than before. Later Ash took a really big step in askin Johnny to move in. He was more than happy and ready to move in with her. Their lives have changed for the better ever since they met and started their relationship. I'd love to see them get married and possibly start a family if ur willin to do a sequel seto. Just a suggestion though.

Aww I am so glad they got their happy ending! Very wonderfully written chapter. Adored this story. 3 We'll done.

Perfect
This is a nice and welcome little surprise just what I needed today.

Thank you so much

Yay, a continuation! Awww, how sweet of Johnny just standing and staring at Ash and growing a blank when talking to Buster X3 I love how they're so in love with each other! Heehee Johnny isn't as shy and innocent as he was ;) I think it's cute Johnny didn't care about getting quilled. And them moving in together? How adorbs. They'd have many adventures together. And omg their life living together is too cute! They're so tired but wait up at night to watch their thing. I'm so glad you continued this! I loved it! Can't wait to read more of your future stories with them ;D