| Reviews for Moana, Makani, and Ahi (The Sea, Wind, and Fire) |
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Gracekim20 chapter 7 . 2/2/2017 What's a leiamano?(I have no clue what that is) it's getting even more interesting. I'll try to read as much as I can before I reach college ok?(then I'll read the rest when I reach home later) |
Gracekim20 chapter 4 . 1/30/2017 Ooo! So intriguing! I even looked up some of the legends and names they didn't use in the movie just to see if it could give me an idea for a story for Moana. Now I just want to see their islands and learn more from the people somehow (I mean like everyone the ones in Hawaii and all of the other islands that have those awesome legends ) it's just so fascinating to me to discover this all from Disney and your story (sorry I'm getting too excited!) can't wait to read the rest keep going Huge fan btw |
Gracekim20 chapter 1 . 1/15/2017 This is really good so far. How did you figure out the names for the new characters?(and what language are all the characters' names from?) |
MagicFireTiger chapter 23 . 1/10/2017 Hmm, nice story. The characters seem a little out of character, a little forced, so if you tried working on that for the next chapters, that would be appreciated. Though the concept is cool and the story decently written, there are some typos and just general story improvements I would be happy to help with, along with me know if you would consider an editor. I look forward to you continuing, anyway, and also, nice character additions and neat story in writing! -MagicFireTiger |
multyfangirl21 chapter 14 . 1/7/2017 It would be funny for a group to try and attack the island , not the arena island ; especially if that group didn't know that 3 demigods are staying on it for a part of their lifetimes. And that the current cheif is friends with the ocean. That fight would last about 15 minutes at the very most. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 8 . 1/6/2017 Maui and Moana seem a little bit oc ,Maui more than Moana , but other wise its pretty good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 2 . 1/5/2017 Ah yes. The young chief that's friends with the ocean. And that's why its best to go into a fight knowing all of what you could be going up against instead of just assuming. :) Looking forward to the next chapter ;) |