9 chapters without lemons

I have to agree with that guy the original was good, yeah it was dark and not everyone was gonna like it, but it did make the aftermath feel earned and it gave Maia, Alicia, and Janne to self reflect and make amends with their allies and it ties into Maia's future relationship with Naruto.

I understand if it felt too dark, but Raptor my friend you could've reworked the arc if you felt it was too dark. *chuckling and sweatdrop* btw it's me HaoRoku who understood why the original traumatized arc had to happen.

I am going to be honest, I don't like this chapter. It comes out of left field and there is little to no build up and it feels like the redemption just isn't earned. What the hell. This was so good before. Yes it was needlessly dark but everything that the chivalry did after felt earned. It felt like they learned their lesson. Now? It might as well be written by a five-year-old in crayon. This is just bad writing here. And you want to know the absolute worst part, everything after this chapter is really good. What the hell. It is like you just caved because the original version was "too dark" and now this entire section is ruined. I don't know what to say other than insert another chapter before this that leads up to this.

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2 years for this moment and it was incredible

Cool chapter continue please.

Excellent chapter as always. Anyways, I have a few ideas I think you might like, regarding Naruto and certain Mature Anime. Would you mind hearing them out?

Hey Raptor when the Special of Elma from Kobayashi-San chi-Maid Dragon from the other Story of Scaldy Bodyguarding Ex-godess we are waiting that Story

another series to pull from as it has great elf characters is Youkoso! Skebe Elf no Mori he

That whole brawl was intense beyond words...

Great chapter!

thank you for update

Cool chapter continue please.