5 week is a long time for new developments for a baby and christian get to miss it because she rather be in a different area if she did not want to lose him why is she treating him like shit if i was him i would walkway and find someone that wont leave me and tell me that she may or may not come back to me and that we could be fucking friend then tell be about the baby but can't really be with is that fair to him

well ana how can you be there for christian if your leaving for your dad's why can't to get therapist in Seattle but instead you leaving how can he be apart of pregnancy if there not in the same area oh that's right he's her sugar daddy that pay's for thing for the baby but dose not get to be in the baby's life

Good ending, no need to write what really would be repetitious as all the other stories. They know where they want to be and good enough. Thank you the story.

Vast improvement compared to where they were and both know what happened to them, their history growing up contributed to their lives as adults. Removing toxic Elena from his life is the best move Christian has made for his improvement and then sharing responsibility for the baby and Ana's wellbeing. All are positive starts to continue where they want to be.

Hormonal changes with unknowing pregnancy could have contributed to Ana's frame of mind or it could have been that she has fallen in love with Christian and was willing to be his submissive but did not see signs that Christian ever fall in love with her. She was disappointed in herself for falling in love with him? Now it is all clear he was already in love with her but Elena's manipulations clouded his mind again. That is now all behind them and should think of what their future should also means to them.

Ana is pregnant, not eating, hypoglycemic and maybe even dehydrated all reasons to have low blood pressure and faint. He has done what is needed, getting rid of Elena, confessing to Grace about his fucked up life and a letter to Ana of much of everything she needs to know. They need to talk and needs to know about her pregnancy. Then what to do next.

Worst time to be alone and miserable when it should be a happy time expecting a baby

Reading the story for the first time after looking at unread older stories of Fifty Shades FanFictions that seems to attract me more now than newer versions. What a dilemma Ana is in, a sub no love ever exchanged, regretting ever signing an NDA contract with Christian, and now wants to just leave him and not see him again, but pregnant by accident. Next chapter to read. Thank you.

It all came together they are back as a couple, happy to finally hold, kiss and say that they love each other. They will be waiting for the arrival of their child and they will be a family. Good read.

They both are dealing with their past in a positive way and they are connecting with each other missing each other which is a good start. Christian tells Ana how much he loves her and Ana will say it soon to him which will tie them together as lovers.

This was another chapter that was so well written. Your writing these two people connecting with each other sharing their feelings knowing they both have to work on their future with each other.

Your writing really captures a readers attention and that letter Christian wrote to Ana was so passionate coming straight from his heart. Glad she agreed to talk to him.

Kate doesn’t know that Ana’s with Christian. He was going to take her to the ball how were they going to explain that they know each other.

Excellent first chapter can’t wait to read what you have in store for Anastasia and the father of her baby Christian Grey.

This was my first time reading "Lost Souls"...I love it. .
I'm impress with your writing skills.
You covered so much in 6-chapters.
Thank you for sharing a sad but beautiful journey
of two beloved characters
I think I'll read a few more of your stories.