This is haunting and amazing

Damn... you seriously need to continue this fic to gaiden. Would be completely awesome! And what happened to black zetsu? Was that the one hinata killed?

Ok this is the single most awesome story about hinata that I have ever read! Top twenty of all time best in my library I think.

I feel conflicted, following and favoriting this. It's really well written, but seeing Hinata break was painful, and the aftermath... Well written, well done, and I hope whatever dark place this came from is washed and healed in the feeling of peace. Live love, love life.

I don't know what to say, but thank you for making this. I didn't know I needed it until I read it

This is just masturbation. And oh look, it is sprinkled with some Uchiha bashing. I get powertrips when they are funny but this is absolutely not so... Yeah, this is a big pile of wank.

lovely xxxxxxxxxxx

I find it so awesome that you inspire such creativity and imagination in each other. Thank you for both sharing the fruits of your labour and the wonder that you find in each other. It really made my day. This was originally a review for What Are You Doing? (YOUTH!) but I had reviewed it two years ago and managed to find even more enjoyment in the sentiment behind it than I did the first time through. Thank you again for sharing.

Short but good

Darkly good

Wow love this

Wow... That was an emotionaly powerful story

Hit or miss
I guess they never miss
Huh
Gotta boyfriend
I bet he doesn’t kiss ya
Muah
He’s gonna find another girl
And he won’t miss ya
He’s gonna stand there
And hit the dab
Like Wiz Khalifa

I have read this 4 times now and after each easing I love it a little more.

Hinata is always the “weak” one. Having her massively OP and broken as a person speaks to me. Love your interpretation of her snapping.

Love it.

Great story so far. Keep up the good work.