I should've known Edge was in cahoots with Dimentio! It all makes sense now!

Wait scratch that I read it wrong srry

Holy crap Mario is only thinking about princess peach right now? While his brother is in a coma? What an asshole.

So I read this a while ago and I'm rereading it now to get hyped for Luigi's Mansion 3! Also, this story is amazing!

Ooh I love this! good job

I love this story! Great from start to finish despite it having a few small blemishes. Either way I loved it!

Some chapters felt too long but it's well written and creative. Good job.

Found this story today and I'm interested already

And thus, we come to an end of one of the best Mario stories I have read. Or maybe I should say, Mario/Sonic and stories I have read.

I am glad to see that Luigi was getting his own party for saving the world and defeating Super Dimentio 2.0. Not gonna lie, I did shed a small tear when Edge died. He was a great villain, but I am glad he got the chance to talk to his brother before he died. That was the perfect way to go.

Lol at the scene where Mario and Luigi go 300cc. Made me think of how that would go in an actual Mario Kart game. I would have a hard time with that for sure.

Anyways, the story, in general, is amazing. It's very rare that you would find a Mario/Sonic story that doesn't center around any of those two characters. Having Luigi taking the spotlight was a nice touch and makes the plot all the more interesting. The character interactions were really well-written and they kept getting better every chapter into this story. The fight scenes between the heroes and the villains were well-written as well and overall, I really dug the plot and every ounce of creativity that was poured into this story. This was a great first fan-fiction.

Thanks for the big shoutout at the end and thank you again for motivating me to write Super Mario Odyssey: A SuperStar Adventure, which has just come out of Writer's Block thanks to this last chapter. Thank you so much for all that you have done for me and I am proud to have given it back to you.

See ya later real soon, TGN!

~SD321 (SpiderDom321)

Thanks for the shoutout! I love this story very much and the ending was pretty goo! I'll check out the others one too whenever I can. You did amazing, TGN!

Great job and you're welcome!

Well, we've finally come to the end of this story.

Despite coming into this story late, it was such a joy to read it right up until the end. The plot is intriguing and creative, as it weaves in characters from Super Paper Mario one of my favorite games in the series.

I had a feeling that Edge would be the final death in this story. The moment where he says goodbye to Blumiere is a well written and somber moment.

It's such a heartwarming moment to see everyone congratulating Luigi for his role in defeating Super Dimentio. It was such a joy to see Luigi's character development since he started out as a coward, but in the end, he was able to show off his hidden courage.
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You have done an amazing job with this story my friend, and thank you so much for the shoutout.

Hell yeah! I loved the ending here. Everything about this was so good. I think you could be less descriptive with some details. I know that sounds vague, but sometimes they may be a bit too long for me. Either way, it's nice to see how everyone is back to normal, even Luigi with his clumsy self from the go-kart scene. That gave me a laugh. Still, he really shined throughout this adventure, and I'm glad he was able to live up to the title of your story. Well done, TGN!

Why thank you for the honorable mention at the end. I really appreciate it!

Well, it's finally finished. I will say that it was a joy to follow this story from beginning to end, and I congratulate you for composing a story with over 200k words, an impressive feat considering this is what I assume to be the first fanfiction you've ever written.

So firstly, the premise when this was still in the crossover section is what intrigued me, as it's incredibly rare to find a story with someone other than Mario and/or Sonic as the main character. The fact that it focused on Luigi immediately made the story more appealing to me.

The plot is interesting, and from the fics I've read, pretty original as well as I've never seen anything like this before. Combining the Paper Mario universe with the "main" Mario universe was an interesting choice, and adding in the Sonic crew added another level of excitement into the story. I still believe this should have been left in the crossover section however considering how important the Sonic characters and the Chaos Emeralds were to the story.

However, for every positive there is something that could be improved. For instance, clothing descriptions and descriptions of characters could be omitted completely unless it's a significant change of clothing. We as the audience already know what the characters look like.

Another improvement is the dialogue of the animals like Colombo. Simply saying he barked or growled or yelped is enough.

And one more thing is that you may want to remove the lyrics of the songs you used in the story, as it's not allowed on this particular site. If someone wanted they could report your story for it and it could possibly be taken down because of it. You can still say they were listening to/singing the song though.

But anyway, I congratulate you for sticking with this story for so long never giving up. Keep writing as I believe you have great potential for the art. With all that being said, great job and I will see you around. Congratulations again.

~Steel