I loved the story but I want to know why thr hell flint tried to rape her if he knew the twins were there? They could easliy beat the crap out of him.

I like your story! Update soon!

i know its been years since you start this story but I just stumbled upon it and I wish you would continue... and I hope it gets much hotter because I have a feeling you would be very good at a stemy scene. Your a good writer, funny too... on that off chance that you even get this, please update soon! :)

Hmm..A very bloody boring story - NOT! It's brilliantly good. You should ask the Weasleys twins to co-operate with them for their sweet revenge with Paul and that blondie girl.

I like your sense of writing..Please update or go on a date with Crabbe,Goyle & Lord Voldemort aka Lord Dirtymortie!

Update right now or you'll have to pay the consequences! )

UPDATE!

Aw. Gosh darn it, Why does everything have to be in relevance to me? I hate love stories yet I can't live without them. lol. Good story.

really good

aw, this is really sweet, love it, update!

This is a wonderful story! Marvelous. Hope that someday it gets finished.

WOW! one of the best katie/oliver stories ive read so far! great job!

well, it's good so far, but i don't think it rates an R. and i don't think a female version of Flint would be able to get into Raveclaw. huffleuff, mayahp but . . Ravenclaw . . no. so. it's good in it's ideas. i also think u need a beta reader bc there are sometimes in the story where a missing word can change the meaning of the sentence, and on occasion it's made me kinda confused. so, either reread your work after leaving it for about an hour or two, or get a beta reader. um, so u know, this is to help you. i really like your ideas and want u to go on. so. update so i can read more and see if ppl actually listen to me or if i'm talkingto air. i think that Katie could have gone out with Paul for a while longer. have him save her from flint and her get over oliver. kinda. but hey, thats me and i have a thing with hurting characters and morphing them really out of shape and making them extremely confused and having no control over what they say nad feel. it's just a thing of mine. u can totally ignore me if you want.

AAZMANDIOUS

so far, this is brilliant! Please continue soon!

Great story! can't wait for an update! Wanting to know what the revenge is! lol

*sque* aw this is great! Ooh Oliver is such a fox. If it were me I wouldn't be able to stop him lol ;-)

Great writing, very realistic, a lot sexier than most Oliver/Katie stories I have read but definitely my number one favourite! Keep updating or else...!