| Reviews for Lucky Child |
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Biku-sensei-sez-meow chapter 111 . 19h Minato is wonderful, every time. He's such a serious guy that he makes NQK seem like a little kid, and it's always nice to see her acting a little more her physical age every now and then, just as a reminder that she's there in that life to live it, not just to help everyone else live theirs. Obviously, this wasn't necessarily a breather, but when she's not getting caught up in Spirit World shenanigans or mothering her boys, I consider that a break from her duties. When she gets to let it out, it's so cathartic. I am really curious to see what you have planned for Byron. A trap set by Hiruko, maybe? A relic of her old life came to haunt her? A new and unexpected pawn of Sensui's? It's pretty out there, but after the turns this story has taken, I'm not really secure guessing much of anything at this point. And of course that last sentence was such a subtle, but still infuriating cliffhanger. We're all glad your test came back negative. Please be safe and practice social distancing. As is the way of the fanfiction author, we are already adept at being socially distant from others, but more distance can never hurt. |
ewokling chapter 111 . 7/28 Starting this off on a serious note, I'm sorry you have to deal with rude, biphobic anons. I'm bisexual myself and it's always so mind-boggling when someone gets invested in the lore or canon of something like YYH, but it's the sexuality and romance in a fic that make it unbelievable? Not the demons or spirit energy or people coming back to life? OKAY. Loved the scene with Kuwabara Senior. Even more excited to see the friction between him and Kurama develop now that it's confirmed he's in the loop. And Minato! I confess I don't know really any German songs, so I'm excited for more reveals about him, even if it's going to be like pulling teeth on his end. He's genuinely one of my favorite of the not-immediate-bunch. Thank you so much for the update! I'm glad your test came back negative, and wishing you good health and vibes for recovery. |
Call Brig On Over chapter 111 . 7/28 Awesome chapter, I know some people with all the chapters like this filler but I disagree. Chapters like this that allow the characters to just interact with each other and maybe learn a little bit something more about each other are important. It is important to see characters having normal lives while they still can. |
Star Charter chapter 111 . 7/28 Reviewing my own fic because the anon below me didn't give me another way to communicate with them. Here's what I want to say for all to see: Interesting take there, anon. You've forgotten one crucial detail, though. NQK ISN'T a lesbian. She came out as pansexual. She can date literally anyone. And if that person is a guy like Kurama, it doesn't make her any less queer. TBH it's shit like this that makes me regret basing a character on myself. I get enough biphobia and bisexual erasure in real life; I don't need it here in my escapist fantasy fanfic series, too. If you've got any more shitty takes like this one up your sleeve, keep them there, because I don't want them. You just make yourself look like a biphobic bigot. Honestly, this sort of comment (which is far from the first of its kind I've received) puts me off of writing ships of any kind into LC at all. No matter what, someone will be pissed at the outcome, and in the event of Keirama, that anger will come with a side of bigotry. And guess what? A same-sex ship would get bigotry, too! It's a lose-lose situation! So just do me a favor and shut the fuck up, biphobic anon. And you can quit reading LC while you're at it. This story ain't for you. You are not welcome here. You are not welcome in my world. You are actively unwanted. I don't want your readership. Keep your biphobia to yourself. |
Guest chapter 111 . 7/28 This better not be a keirama fic... You went through the trouble of writing that she came out you dont come out for being straight... So NQK better have a lesbian lover |
craftscute09 chapter 111 . 7/28 Congrats on the negative result! And wow, I was reading the An with the shoutouts and was so surprised I got a mention (back to you with the gorgeous hehe) thank u sp much for it and the update! Heart heart! |
PretiBurdi chapter 111 . 7/27 Yaaaaas I'll be the best bean there is! My YYH group on Facebook was like "YO LUCKYCHILD UPDATE" and I threw down my dog (just kidding I picked him up) and threw down my schoolwork and leapt onto the computer, even though I promised myself I would wait. I missed kurama this chapter now, he's been in so many xD I'm glad you don't have Covid make sure you are taking lots of vitamins and water and sleeping ! That's all I got I'm not even first aid certified (Thursday, I'll update my suggestions if that changes lol) |
Yakiitori chapter 111 . 7/27 Another great chapter, as usual! I'm quite liking Byronquite a charming character! I'm quite looking forward to this final story arc, though I must admit I'll be sad to see it go. Until next time! |
cezarina chapter 111 . 7/27 The offer to study abroad is tempting, but will NQK take the chance? That would mean moving away from all the crazy action waiting to take place. What would that mean? And Kuwabara Sr. is so.. chill about all of this, about the fact that Kurama doesn't like him. I wonder if NQK will actually put in a good word for him, but what if she's going to have a falling out with Kurama then? That's not something I can handle. I swear to God I'm probably looking for things that aren't there but if you make me ship these two and then break my heart in a million freaking pieces I'm gonna... curl in a ball and cry :( |
vodka-and-tea chapter 111 . 7/27 was a good chapter, but i'm not a big sailor moon fan (not that i dislike it. always wanted to watch it as a kid but never was able to get the exposure to it) so not as much for me. seems like her ditching amanuma is gonna bite her in the ass. im not gon' lie, your chapters tend to come out right when i'm like "gah i wish there was another chapter, that'd hit the spot!". and i'm single and in quarantine having an existential crisis every other day so all i want is some blatant kurama fanservice T.T i know i could go elsewhere for that, but i'm really picky about the quality of writing needing to be good and i haven't really found a fanfic that gives kurama fanservice and is also super well written like yours is. so you know.. if you're in the mood to help out some single ladies in need of escape from the shitshow that is this world around us... ;) ;) ;) i cringe at actual romance (probably part of why i'm still single lol) so.. romance adjacent is all i'm asking for lol |
C. S. Stars chapter 111 . 7/27 Omg. I love Kuwabara Sr. And love that you include him in this. I’ve never seen him in a fic before. Poor Kei and Kuwabara tho, I hope it all clears up soon. Byron is awesome. I like him, and have a few possible theories on his role later on... Poor Kei! I want to hug her and bundle her up into a blanket cocoon. So glad you’re results are negative! Such a relief! |
tammywammy9 chapter 111 . 7/27 I'm super glad to hear that you don't have COVID-19! I do hope you get over your icky illness and come out healthy and strong. I'm gonna be honest: I thought Shizuru hated Kei after everything but I was relieved to find that it was quite the opposite. Kuwabara Sr is just so fricken cool and sweet I just can't take it lol. I wonder how Kurama will react to Sr not giving up on his relationship and the fact that he knows Kurama's secret. I don't wanna be there for the fall out but would love to be a fly on the for it, yknow? I really, really, REALLY hope that Kei and Kuwabara will work things out bc it's heartbreaking to see any dispute between them. I. Love. Byron. Love him. Please don't make him an enemy lol. His little bit was the highlight of the chapter for me; he's just so dang intriguing and adorable. I enjoyed seeing a new side of Minato even though he was SUPREMELY uncomfortable with our girl there (even I felt intrusive reading that scene). Looking forward to the next chapter! Get well soon! |
Kaiya Azure chapter 111 . 7/27 Get well soon. On the bright side, I guess Kurama doesn't need to worry about being discovered by Kuwabara's father. Though it would be especially funny if Shiori comes out and tells Kurama that she knew he was more than human for a lot longer than what he thought. She just kept quiet because she wanted him to open up to her. Either way, Shiori loves him because he is her son. Yeah, "gift" might be an understatement. Though I wonder how things between Minato and Ami might be affected. Well, that and I hope Keiko ditching the arcade date doesn't come back to haunt her. Looking forward to seeing what role Byron might play. |
MyWorldHeartBeating chapter 111 . 7/27 Glad your test came back negative! :D I had a feeling it was Sailor Mercury when you mentioned the blue hair and bangs. Seems like she has a crush on Minato then? Interesting. Somehow, I have a feeling that with Kei skipping out on the arcade might have triggered something to happen. Maybe not, but it's just a guess. Can't wait to read your next update! Good luck! :D |
MidnightAngelJustForYou chapter 111 . 7/27 Love this story! Cannot wait to see what Kurama has in store and how he will respond to Kuwabara Sr.! (bet his foxy nature and mean streak will make an appearance and show why he is the smartest) Also, I really enjoy these little moments Keiko has with Minato and Kagome.(this chapter was a breath of fresh air before Sensui) Maybe in the future we will see more heart to heart with Kuwabara? The triangle is getting hot in here! :))) Anyway, love your writing style! |