Your writing is so good! I loved this! Thank you for writing it!

I loved Sebastian's "idjit" questions. Though I think I've got a good one: "When people thought the earth was flat, where did they hide the mountains?" Actually, that's from Beetle Bailey, but still. I could just hear Lil' Sebastian asking that.

And I love how you write Blaise. I'm so happy someone writes about him, because he's so fun.

Though what did you think when Edgeworth called him a "failure as a father" in the translation patch? "That's an understatement"? Or perhaps, "Well, Edgeworth, they can't all YOUR dad, can they?"

Nice to see Gummy's humble beginnings here :)

I'm surprised Blaise can still muster self-pitying lamenting this dipf*ck he calls a son - after all, don't they say don't weep for the stupid - you'll be crying all day?

Sebastian's list of Eejit questions nearly had me in stitches. All that was left was for him to ponder: If your eyes were in our ears would we walk sideways? XD

Of course, crocodile tears aside, our resident pyro still got the last laugh by literally hitting below the belt and ensuring Nosferatu became two olives short of a martini before giving him one hell of a shocker (no not THAT MANUAL variety!)...dammit wonder if that was where Manny got the idea for abusing poor Phaya years later?!

Those two really deserve each other... somewhere out there I know someone ships these two fiends together, who equally deserve to deck it out for the esteemed title of Duke of Douchebaggery. In the end, I think Blaise wins though. He's a big part of what started the horrid chain of events in AA, I have no words. In this case, I think dildo is a perfectly acceptable insult. Like, I'd call him a d*ck but he's not real enough...but I digress.

Ending a story is the hardest part, but once again, you did a great job comically ending this laugh-festy while showing just how cruelly vengeful and nefarious the Chief Prosecutor was. Looking forward to what you come up with next!

That last fight... I recognize that.

You watched season 5 episode 16 of star wars the clone wars, didn't you? That scene perfectly imitated the fight between sidious and maul.

I don't know who had the worst time: Manfred having the torture of a lifetime, Blaise being bullied by his main flaw on the SS-5 scheme and Keyes lurking around freely (and not killing his own SON yet) or Gant being touched by the grim reaper Oldbag... GANT DEFINITELY
There's no way this story could be improved. The only possible thing to do is continue this through another fic. I'm going to ask this, however: take as much time as you like if you want to continue this because rushed things aren't what we seek in the end. Kharmen Gavin is based on your mom? Well, reality is even weirder than fiction...
Have a nice Easter and April fools day (our fools day is on 28th December, por lo que no se me ocurren bromas aún).
InjusticeforAll

THIS ISA DUMB THE AUTHOR IS DUMB DO DIE

Noooooo...it's over.

Well, you deserve an applause good sir. Excellent, if I do say so myself. I can't wait to see following content.

*sniffles* I'm...I'm going to miss this story...

Una vez más, estoy impresionado..
I am amazed by your skills once again because of how amusing could be a "normal situation" if AA and AAI characters get into that situation and how everything goes to hell. Cammy's gimmick is well used to torture Dracula, the Faradays suffering the power of his fingers, Ema being oblivious to the anger of little riding crop lady and eventually pissed with Klavier once again. Kristoph hitting Lana? Did you not learn anything? Mama Gavin is now added to your list of good OC and with only one appearance I'm questioning the old phrase "Karma is a bitch"; overprotective mothers on the other hand can be worse by tenfold . Lana was even better showing who was the boss to periwinkle, Ms overprotective, Von Karma and her brat sister, for a future Chief Prosecutor she sure needed that strength.
Hi there Palaeno! Thanks for asking Edgey the 64000 question and unconsciously torturing Franny and Manny by answering the questions of Condophia.
HOW THIS IS GOING TO END?
Greetings from Argentina,
InjusticeforAll

Gumballs BUMball...Thanks a lot I will never look at gum the same way again! next time I pop
a jawbreaker into my mouth would that make me a BUTT munch?! XD

The "it's not pink it's MAGENTA (or in your case - "MAROON!") gag never gets old… although I did laugh myself silly at the idea of Miles being compared to one village people!

It's official… Mama Gavin is the reason Kristoph is the narcissistic periwinkle piss headed fiend we all love to hate! He had no prayer in hell of ever turning out normal (then again explain Klavier… Nurture versus nature I truly have nothing to explain the night and day differences between him and his continuously foiled Casanova but otherwise angelic by comparison little brother!) With the mother that convinced her psycho in the making sign that contrary to what anybody tells him, he looks as good as bacon tastes!

Kudos on Finding so many different products that could be mistaken for "below the torso" PADS I thought you were just going to make Sleeping Booby (who BTW has no pupils that nobody seems to notice due to her distracting ...headlights) come back with a NOTEpad…but it was the gag that ever increased in comedy along with the suspected child molesting vampire's blood pressure!
Great chapter am stoked/and sad it's all coming to an end! Keep it up my friend! :)

Geez, Franziska, the one time those around you actually want you to use that riding crop (or whip).
I knew this chapter would be good when I saw Palaeno's name. I knew his overly cheerful and friendly demeanor was going to be used to great effect. You didn't disappoint.
I'm not even sure where Palaeno learned "America BLEEP Yeah."
And suuuure, Manfred. Franziska getting her first period was all Gregory Edgeworth's fault just to ruin your already ruined 'vacation.'
I know I should have laughed at Gilberta's comparison of her birthday with Franziska's, but it was just too depressing. Blaise said he got the donut from under the break room fridge that he gave to Sebastian, so I'm guessing the muffin Manfred passed to his elder daughter came from about the same place. Yick. And I honestly feel bad for Gilberta, even if she apparently has succeeded in carving out her own path.
Franziska being all mood swingy was fun, but I think I preferred the similar situation with Rayfa in Imperial Daddy. Because Rayfa beat up two monks for attempting to perform an exorcism. And to add insult to injury, they ended up having to buy her feminine products. (Of course, they got payback on Inga, but still...)
Though that Blaise has done the whole "turn the couch cushion over" gambit to hide a blood stain. Hmm. Could it be from Sebastian's mother when Blaise killed her? Because we totally know he killed her. Or perhaps it's best left unknown.
I was really pleased to see the new chapter. I hope things improve with your workload. Good luck!

Congrats for nailing the wrath of Nature's Fury and making it so much more hilarious than horror story - Franny's innocent confusion (And fear of defense attorneys in her closet!) and Manfred floundering like a fish out of water was hilarious!

The idea of Manny squirming because he's clueless about women's monthly curse turning them into Potential Murder Suspect was great, (I hope even as a kid Franny's riding crop hurt like the dickens!) and the Team America song nearly killed me! The best part out of a mostly forgettable movie!

Also I love how Nosferatu gets panicked about Blaise punishing him in the worst way possible - by leaving him with He of Unfortunate Bowl Cut idiot son #1! It's great seeing the torture of my number 2 most despised AA character - looking forward to the next chapter! :)

I enjoyed how you wrote the dreams for Franziska and Manfred. It was interesting peeing into their minds, seeing their desires and fears. And then you have Miles over there with his daily nightmare... how is he still sane after fifteen years of that? It makes me want to cry...

As a fellow young lady, I have never felt worse for Franziska than now in her current situation. Mother Nature can be a real ***** sometimes, can't she?

And I love how you put Palaeno in this! His quirks and overwhelming friendliness can be quite a bit unsettling, huh?

AMERICA! FUDGE YEAH! (Yeah, Veterans' Day!)

I'm sorry I hadn't reviewed yet. Anyway, I thought Chapter 7 was hilarious. I loved seeing Teenage Justine. She kind of had a stick up her butt even then, didn't she?
And Keyes being the pizza boy was totally Chekhov level irony. That the guy Blaise was tearing up the city looking for just walked up to his door and rang the bell.
And I love how Bobby had the same gestures as a teenager. And Lil Horace being exasperated with him.
Oh, and I love how you're bringing in the Investigations 2 characters. Since previously we had only really seen Blaise speak.
And Lil Sebastian. Poor kid. A lot of people hate him, but I never did. How could I? He's expressive and funny. Plus, honestly, how can you hate a kid who's lived his whole life trying to get his prick dad's approval?
I love where this is going and can't wait to see Blaise's reaction to Manfred and the deed.

Well, I laughed for five minutes straight when Gant explained Edgeworth's supposed homosexuality when examining the color of his golf ball. I still can't think about it without giggling to myself! I never thought of that to be the reason for Edgey loving maroon so much... not that I want to consider it now. And omigosh, picturing Gant and von Karma acting like five-year-olds trying to get von Karma out of the car while Miles and Franziska just stood and watched- that killed me! Excellent job, and I hope to see the next chapter in the near future!

Closet homosexual who dances ballet...
And of course, my personal favorite...(and YOU know why!)
"Why can't anyone tell the difference between maroon and pink?!"

The same reason Gant gives everyone cringey nicknames and Manfred had to be hauled in along with the car door to play putt-putt...only to get hit in his little Mannies... XD

BECAUSE IT'S FARKING FUNNIER THAT WAY!

Hee!

Hands down this is my favorite story of all the ones you've got going on right now! Gant and Manny are the ultimate odd couple! Also, the golf hole names were sooo cheesy that they needed to be handled Caerphilly, but OH SO Gouda! I Camembert! You kill me! EVERY SINGLE TIME! :p