Reviews for Fate's Children
copet chapter 18 . 11/12/2019
A great story! Not only a happy ending for Loki, but it is implied that is a beginning of a better end for the nine Realms... and for Roska. I think there is potential for a continuation if you wanted. But you managed a lot with these chapters. Excellent job!
Suzy P chapter 18 . 7/9/2018
I really enjoyed reading this story.
My only point is that in the middle it did lack a little something, but that would not stop me reading it as I really wanted to see how their story ended.

A follow up story would be great.

You are a talented writer who obviously has put a lot of detail and work into your story and it does come across.

Thanks for a great read. Keep writing.
SilverGhostKitsune chapter 18 . 4/23/2018
I loved this!
loulouflowerpower chapter 18 . 1/25/2018
I really loved reading this story, it's one of the best Loki/OC stories that I've read. I'm curious, is there going to be a squeal?
theladykate22 chapter 1 . 9/21/2017
Love your first chapter! You did an excellent job engaging your reader from the very start of the story. I can't wait to read more.
Red of Dawn chapter 18 . 9/7/2017
This is one of the greatest fanfictions I have ever read, and by far the best Thor fanfiction. Your writing is elegant and interesting, never once did I skim through descriptions or feel bored. You managed to keep Loki completely in character, while still making his relationships believable. Your OC is extremely interesting and has a personality that works well with Loki and I thoroughly enjoyed reading all of their interactions. Not to mention that the story was wholly original and well thought out. I loved this fanfiction and cannot believe it doesnt have more readers. Thank you so so much for giving us this work of art.

On another note I would absolutely adore a sequel, but if you don't wish to write one or wish take a break, I am satisfied with what we got. (Even though it totally destroyed me, my heart, and my sleeping schedule)
juliane.schloesser chapter 18 . 8/30/2017
Wow, i have to say this was by far the absolute best fanfic i've read so far. Well written, a really interesting twist of plot with all the references to mythology and a oc, who lives up to loki and can give him also a hard time. The pacing of their romance was so well balanced and realistic, loved it. I'm still in awe, but also a little bit sad that I finished this masterpiece already. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, I will think about this story for a long time for sure!
juliane.schloesser chapter 18 . 8/30/2017
Wow, i have to say this was by far the absolute best fanfic i've read so far. Well written, a really interesting twist of plot with all the references to mythology and a oc, who lives up to loki and can give him also a hard time. The pacing of their romance was so well balanced and realistic, loved it. I'm still in awe, but also a little bit sad that I finished this masterpiece already. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, I will think about this story for a long time for sure!
pinkpearl89 chapter 17 . 8/16/2017
This was a lovely story, thank you for sharing!
Shael Orthovin chapter 18 . 7/31/2017
This story deserves much more attention than it gets. Amazing final chapter ! Everything in this story was perfectly put together, from the characters to the plot. The way you dealt with magic is also very interesting. I wish this was actually canon... It's been a delight to read this, so thank you for writing this amazing fic.
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Lady Jensen chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
There will be a sequel? I hope so!
Shael Orthovin chapter 16 . 7/23/2017
Once again, an excellent chapter ! Can't wait to see more !
S. O.
LarissaValentiMeedachi2613 chapter 16 . 7/16/2017
Omg I was so pumped for the next chapter and it was the glossary! I really hope you update soon!
Shael Orthovin chapter 14 . 6/25/2017
I really like the way things are going with this ! I particularely appreciate how your characters slowly evolve
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LarissaValentiMeedachi2613 chapter 12 . 5/28/2017
Ahhhhhhhggg! It finally happened, what a great chapter I can't wait for more xx
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