Aww I love the Tsuna and Leon moments~~

So good

So good I want more

It's interesting :)

Not a bad start. Keep up the creative work! X3

This is really interesting! The update makes me really happy XD! But take it easy, real life's sometimes nice, sometimes a bitch, but most of the time, it's just there. If writing shorter chapters makes it easier, just do that. Who cares about the length! If it's got a nice plot, people will read it! Just like me! Making me wonder why I didn't read this any sooner, hm...

Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh. I always like this storyline even if it's most khr fics. I love this fic so far. It's simple and straightforward. The only weird thing is in the summary he's like a retired assasin & he's only like 13 years old? Also he must not be deep into that life if he doesn't know reborn but he talks like he's never had a normal life because he was like 'the normality of normal life'. I wonder how you'll go with this. I'll be waiting for the next update3

Glad you are back. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

It's alright, first chapter doesn't always have to be eventful! I like how you're starting to set stuff up, but I can I ask you to do something in your upcoming chapters? Please break your paragraphs up a bit more. Generally when there's a scene change and the like, a new paragraph is made. It will make your writing easier to read and will also get some readers more willing to read your work as well. Good luck with the next chapter!

it's an interesting story, but still need an improvement on grammar and how you describe it

Waooo it's good!continue please XD!

There is potential in story, but You should work on one thing for sure. Definitely to many sentences are starting with "he"

Hi, I love your story so far, I would also like a R27 romance, maybe a snarky one full of sarcasm and pranks, though sense you have a plot here I don't want to take from that, so write how you see the story ending. Can't wait for the next chapter to see Tsuna's and reborn's reactions to each other.

Is Vongola going to have Natsu as their heir? Because he is the more "talented" Sawada. Well it's a good starting chapter and I hope to learn more about this Tsuna!

so... Natsu seems nice but you said that he was infamous? well, I'll just wait for the next chap. the prologue is okay, I guess. I found a few mistake but they are not really noticeable. Can't wait for the next chapter!