Beautiful

WHY DID YOU THIS TO MY HEART

Waaaaah beautiful

Beautiful. I've seen the film three times now and I love love love that scene in the elevator. The little looks and intimate moments from when they leave Yavin4 the second time just get to me. I want more for these guys! This was lovely.

Wow, I love the reasoning behind the names.

I loved this!

I loved it. Keep it up.

This is how it should have ended. Great job.

OMG! This was exactly what I was looking for! I just watched Rouge 1, like, I finished about 20 minutes ago, and I needed this. So thank you :)
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Just saw the movie and i really had to read something about them. This is beautiful.

Excellent piece, Laliel! I liked the names and how they complimented each other. The line about callouses was an especially nice touch. Another compliment between them, like their nicknames. I liked the last line as well.

Ugh! This is so beautiful! You really captured what they were feeling in such a beautiful, tragic scene. Good work! 3

This is so beautiful! Well done well done indeed

aaawww that scene reallly killed me, I was in tears when they hugged... I think you portrayed very well what they were thinking and their expression in their eyes was everything. Thanks for this. Greetings from Argentina.

so sad but sweet. thank you for writing it