Reviews for RvBvRWBY: Revitilization
Italian Yakuza chapter 16 . 7/13
Ok to whomever the anon is for demanding DocTokuMA to continue this story, he/she doesn't owe you and most importantly she doesn't owe anyone to continue this story. Yeah it sucks the story isn't being continued but you've to understand maybe the author is facing some dilemma or something. It could be something serious or maybe not so serious. Either way, it's not gonna make the Author suddenly update. And demanding or complaining isn't really a good motivator.

To DocTokuMA, while we don't know the reasons for you not continuing, *koff koff* demanding readers*koff koff*, I would like to say thank you for writing a good story of the Red Vs Blues and RWBY, they weren't just in character done well, you've done what many crossover writers fail to do, make them interact with each other and deal with each others situation perfectly well. So bravo in creating a fun yet still great crossover story. Now I'll admit if I don't know if you'll continue but if you choose to discontinue, it's a shame yet it is understandable, fanfiction is non profit after all.

So to DocTokuMA, thanks for writing a great story that we all enjoyed reading.
Anon chapter 16 . 6/22
I've seen the stories you added to your favorites the most recent is in this year, so you have better have a good reason for not updating in 2 FREAKIN' YEARS!
Firestar001 chapter 10 . 5/15
I do enjoy this chapter most of all because it deals with the Faunus issue, Caboose’s speech, South and Wash, the flashback. It’s very enjoyable.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/29
I love this story and that you kept south but I’m going to ask the question that probably a million others have asked is this story dead
G119 chapter 16 . 12/30/2019
Why doesn’t Ruby or Yang ever mention that Church sounds like their Dad?
Annimo chapter 16 . 10/17/2019
Me gusta esta historia.
Espero la continuación XP
qazse chapter 16 . 8/31/2019
Hopefully this gets continued.
FLASHFAN123 chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
Okay, so they noticed Tex sounds like Goodwitch and Washington sounds like Ozpin, but Yang and Ruby still haven't noticed Church sounds like their dad?
Dovahkiin795 chapter 7 . 7/15/2019
this story is officially dead as it's been a year
hyabusabros chapter 16 . 6/28/2019
I hope you do the next seasons of RvB as RvBvRWBY
waterlynx11 chapter 6 . 6/16/2019
pyrrha want the d
Guest chapter 16 . 6/12/2019
Man are you still writing red versus blue meets rwby fan fictions because I really want to know what happens next and to wonder what you're gonna take it from there cause it's been a long time since you wrote the final chapter for this story I hope you aren't quitting
Bismarck Alexander chapter 16 . 6/6/2019
Yeah Blake is obviously not thinking clearly right now. While Delta says she and Wash are alike I think she came to a conclusion that he’s like Adam. Projecting his image onto the Agent.

Which is making her abandon her and the mission. And I like to point out that South shot Wash in the back so had every reason to kill her.

Plus South and Pyrrha decided to follow her so leaving them behind to face the Meta that’s on Blake. This is her being hypocritical; sneaking off and leaving her team since the beginning, keeping secrets, and endangering the mission.

I can only imagine what her team is gonna say. The verbal bashing will be immense. Probably punish her by making her sleep with Zwei.

And Pyrrha... I wonder what Jaune will say to her. Maybe it will be bring them closer.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/23/2019
I have to say, this has to be one of the best Red vs Blue and RWBY crossovers. I hope it does continue sense it left off on a cliff hanger
Bismarck Alexander chapter 14 . 5/11/2019
Okay so no ones asking about RVB War. You should’ve made Wash say “we use your outposts as testing grounds” Because no one’s asking about command making them go through ‘ridiculous scenarios’.
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