I love this story and was so sad to realize it was unfinished! Thank you for sharing it, your characterizations are so spot on.

I keep coming back here hoping that you've updated this nifty story...

Awww, I just found this and it’s soooo good! I hope you still have plans to write more. I need to know what happens next!

Awww...this is very hard, indeed. John and Harold getting close to meet again, but not yet in this chapter - we're really kept under tension! ;-)
Otherwise, the interaction between all the characters is spot on and beautiful (I love especially the scene with John and Russ and Harold and the Machine having a sort of heart-to-heart-chat, finally!).
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Yah! Love the update. The character interaction is great. Finch is getting closer to meeting up with Reese - can't wait to see how you do it :) More please :)

I will give you all the time you need, if the result is this compelling. In fact, I love the slow, s-l-o-w!- manner in which you are handling the reunions, and in particular the yet-to-happen face to face meeting of Reese and Finch. You've chosen a powerful and painful and appropriate way to handle the aftermath of 5-13-fitting the magnitude of the events in that episode. Every character is portrayed exactly as I know them to be, with no false notes. I teared up at the end of this chapter-"He's Finch's dog." Brava.

Love the update. It's easy to stay with a story when it's written as well as this one. Prolific and quality rarely go hand-in-hand. Love to see the broken team slowly coming back together. More, please :)

Love the bear hug from Fusco. Hope John hasn't had too much to drink - the detective might wind up wearing it :) Can't wait to see how Harold and John reconnect. More please.

Nice update :) Good to see that Reese still has some protector left in him. Finch is back in town and Shaw's getting closer - it won't be long now...

Love the chapter. Has some great detail fill in for the characters. Finch is coming back to NY, Fusco thinks Shaw is seeing things, and Reese is dispondent about being alive. Can't wait for more :)

Excellent story.

I keep watching for each new chapter and was rewarded today1. Thanks for all the time and effort you put into this story. Can't wait for more!

Getting both better and more sad, your story! I like the interaction between Harold and Grace very much, because I believe, too, that it would take Harold a long time to adapt to a new life - after all that happened! And John, being back to his old ways; the only way he knows to adapt. *still mourning the end of POI*

I am loving this! I look forward to more.

This is sooo good! More, please!