so is there no more?

when will the next chapter come?

Loving the story but I'm hoping to see Spike/Humdrum get some more action
I'm wondering if you plan on including the drama of when Spike wants to find out more about dragons or under goes mysterious dragon changes
meaning the things found in...

1. season 2 episode 21- Dragon Quest- after observing the Dragon Migration Spike doesn't feel like a real dragon so he follows them, and ultimately learns more about dragons and where he truly belongs
(maybe you could have a dragon villain say that Humdrum isn't a true dragon leading Spike to travel to the dragon lands to catch the villain who escaped and learn more about dragons in general)

2. season 2 episode 10- Secret of My Excess- after getting a bit greedy Spike rapidly starts growing until he's a giant greedy monster, ultimately he returns to normal when he remembers whats important (hope to see something similar and Spike wreck the city Kaiju style or at least similar to the monsters from Powerpuff girls)

3. not to mention the Gauntlet of Fire and Molt Down (I especially hope you have Spike grow wings at some point)

Good job keep going

That's one awesome chapter! Everyone has a tough choice to make.

I'm tracking this on fimfiction, but if I follow here, at least I get an email notice.

i enjoyed this chapter immensely. i really liked sunset and twilight's conversation, and the decision applejack made is a good one. i'm glad the team's all back together, and i'm excited to see where it goes from here. i am especially keen to see Rainbow Dash and Twilight's conversation

wow there was a lot to unpack in this chapter but it was very good!

AAAAAAAAAA THE TWILIGHT SECTIONS OF THIS WERE SO EXCELLENT the frank conversation about sexuality/queer theory made me so happyyy and i love sunset and i love your headcanons for their sexual and romantic orientations, i have read that fic so that's how i knew your rainbow dash is ace earlier (and my rainbow dash is ace, and i'm ace!) but hearing sunset be like "you should talk to pinkie and rainbow dash" made me really happy, i headcanon sunset as a lesbian so having her be like you should talk to these m-spec and a-spec people was just so excellent to me, is twilight demi bi, even if she doesn't settle on that label i adore this, i'm real glad to see twilight called out for her trust issues too i'm very excited to see these plotlines continued in this future, this was fun, bummer about fetlock though now dash is in a rough situation

WAH! THIS IS SO CUTE! JFC I LOVE IT! X'D
(tho No Trust for Braeburn! No! Trust!)

Oh, we're getting to know what AJ and Twilight were up to, during the other chapters. This should be good. Twilight, is still being paranoid and afraid, that she might be followed, thus making her journey to the mountains, a bit more complicated. The sense of paranoia and hidden danger, was a great way to add tension and fear, as we never know wether Twilight is safe or not. After some time traveling, she eventually makes it to the top, to the very location of where she got her powers. Now all she can do, is wait…and eventually, her waiting pays off, as Sunset arrives, though this time around she's not as bitter as before, and merely wants to relive, her old memories with her friends. Thankfully she's right, and the two share a rather bittersweet moment together. This was a very interesting yet great bit. I loved this bit. There's no action, no fight scene, no animosity, just two enemies becoming friends for one night, remembering the old days once again (while also having a few really cool, bits of info about Twilight's past). Of course, they're still enemies at the end of the day, so they have an argument, with Sunset calling out Twilight on how she doesn't trust her own team, keeping secrets from them and not having faith in them. It's good to see someone finally acknowledge this and bring it up, and thankfully it seems to do the job, as Twilight admits to her poor behavior. She's still not fully over it, enough to finally start trusting them again, but it's a step in the right direction. Hopefully she can start, becoming more trusting eventually. It was also good, to see you tackle Twilight's sexuality, how she doesn't really know herself and where she stands on her relationship with Sunset and Flash. Really interesting stuff, that helped to give some great development for her. Her talking about with her team, like you seem to be hinting here, would be a good first step, to deal with both her sexuality and building more trust with her team. Really hope, that's what you're going for.

AJ meanwhile, is having a great time with her family, bonding with her sister over farming activities. Aww cute.…that is, until AJ starts talking about work, which great disappoints Bloom. Still, it's always great to see the loving and close Apple family. Even Braeburn is there. Awww, I love it all. Though, things get rather emotional, when Bloom insists she give up the super hero life, and stay on the farm, sparking some inner conflict and turmoil for Applejack, on wether or not she should. Which only get more complicated, when Bloom overhears a call from Pinkie, talking about the bakery and gets upset, believing that she'll end up leaving her, like her parents did. Oh man, that hit me so hard, you have no idea. Seriously though, I loved this bit. The internal conflict of AJ, not knowing wether she should stay or return to her friends, not to mention if she should hang op the cape and cowl. And who else should she turn to, but the rest of her family. Thankfully, good old Grandma tells her, she's not the only one dealing with her demons (as we learn the fun but BRUTAL history, behind how her parents met) and that she should go back to the city, if that's really what she wants. It was a great conflict and dealt with wonderfully. And before she leaves, she makes up with Bloom, promising she'll visit. Aww very sweet.

And with that, the chapter ends. Both mares return, Fetlock's still in crazy pharaoh mode, leaving Rainbow in charge and AJ & Pinkie get ready to start their bakery. Great stuff.

Well this was certainly interesting, I figured Applejack wouldn't stay but the way she made her decision to go back was intriguing to say the least and I love how it seems that history repeated itself regarding Bright Mac and Pear Butter with Applejack and Spike. As for Twilight, I don't mind that she was figuring out her sexual orientation with Sunset but she seems to forget that Sunset was still stalking her! And that's a big no-no, Twilight was trying to get away from her and yet she still shows up! All I can say is I hope Twilight will be open about this and her friends will make her realize that she's setting herself up in a toxic relationship. Sunset needs to learn to have some boundaries or else she risks losing the one pony she cares about for good. On the plus side, Rainbow gets to be the new head curator, but the question is will this make things easy or harder for her? I guess we'll find out in time. All and all a great chapter and I look forward to what comes next.

Oh Dash. You have no idea. ;)

HOLY SHIT WHAT A CHAPTER I NEED TO LIE DOWN wow this was a whole lot. i really enjoyed large portions of this! uhh a stand out is fluttershy and delancy's scene, like, i was so ready to be annoyed bc he didn't tell her about him being discord BUT THEN THEY HAD A MATURE CONVERSATION ABOUT THEIR FEELINGS AND HOW TO IMPROVE THEIR RELATIONSHIP AND I LOVED IT THEY'RE GONNA PLAY LASER TAG AND HAVE TEA AND PILLOW FIGHTS AND BE IN LOVE, it literally took me forever to read this chapter because it was so high stress but very rewarding. GOSH DASH AND FETLOCK'S DINNER SCENE, I LITERALLY WENT "SHE'S ACE" JUST UNRELATED LIKE AND THEN IT ACTUALLY CAME UP AND I LOST MY DAMN MIND, i really enjoyed the parallel of these women to his wives that was dope im glad you're gonna explore that connection more later BUT DISCORD BROKE FETLOCK ARE YOU TAKING CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM i hope that comes up again too ANYWAY THIS WAS WILD AND I LOVED IT IM GLAD YOU'RE NOT DEAD I WAS WORRIED BC ITS BEEN A WHILE