This is an excellent story! Please keep writing it.

Amazing story.

I liked the chapter!

I probably should have included this in the last review but in world of remnant they said the great war took place around a hundred years ago. also it is good to see some of the predecessors of the MCs making appearances. I really hope we get to see Summer and team STRQ at some point.

the thought occurs that the intruder was Ozpin, but that is merely a bit of wild speculation on my part.

Either way this story is really unique and I hope to see where it goes from here.

Someone really got to teach him/her to speak. That might help him/her out.
And I am pretty sure The Intruder is probably dead by now from old age.

Did Artal grow back her arm at some point or is it still missing? also i love this fic so much
i just had to keep reading and its now almost 3:00 in the morning please keep writing.

Aww I was hoping for them to do some sort of face(mask?) paint like Native American style

Love it need more of it. I really enjoy looking into the mind of The Alpha. But who is the presence? At first I thought it was Salem but now I'm not so sure.

Yes, I do realize that. I was just pointing out that we have a grim of significant intellect, who seems to be metamorphosing, slowly, into a more humanoid shape, who also has a female persona inside of it's head. Just a little much coincidence for it to amount to nothing in my mind.

OOOHHHHH I get it I know what art is now aayyyyyy! I won't spoil it for other people but that's a unique twist!

POTENTAIL SPOILR VIA THEORYCRAFTING

Don't confirm this, I'd rather find out for sure as the story progresses.
But Artal is Salem, isn't she?

LOL to Artal, Thumbs up btw and love to see the next ypdate!

Oh, Artal! You maniacal mastermind you!

Awesome chapter