Very well-written and well thought-out story. I could easily imagine this as an episode from the series.

Good job!

Fun idea. Keep up the good work!

This is by far one of the best Gummi Bear stories I've ever read. Gusto is my favorite Gummi and I love how you explored Sunni's crush on him. She's a teenager (can't be older than 15 or 16) and he's in his early-mid twenties. Who knows? In a few years when she's older it may work. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Totally and compleately an awesome peice of work. The idea of a creative energy sucking vampire is something I have never heard of before, so orriginal. I love it. Your way story telling is awesome.

Cr8tive idea, vry intresting, hope ur write more, sn! gr8 chap!

Beautiful, this is awesome, hope u write more like these there brill. Keep it going!

Now that is good.

Holy Cow! Oh my goodness! This story was classic Gummi Bears, I could see it occurring. It had a hint of Edward Munch in it too. The way you described Gusto’s last painting stuck me as an inter-turmoil Munch painting…it was fantastic. This story was great. I love the snow at the end, nice touch. I also have to agree with your arrangement at the end and Sunni’s thoughts…just how it should be. She has a young girl crush, and like you said it’s not reciprocated…and shouldn’t be. You hit it right on the head, perfect. It’s funny, I sat down to read this in pieces…but once I started, I was in…I couldn’t stop. Wow! You have a serious talent. Fantastic story. Keep up the excellent work. ~Molly

Hi,

This was a good, original and deep story.

It was beautiful the way you handled Sunni and Gusto's relationship. They can't really end up together, because at this point Sunni is twelve or thirteen and Gusto is in his twenties, and when Sunni is old enough the circustances will probebly change, she might not like him anymore. Its mainly because there aren't a lot of boy Gummis' for her to choose from where they are. But the leap off the cliff, where he saved her, that almost made me cry.

Red Turtle

This is a brilliant story, where did you get this idea from? Will you write more or not?

Hooray! Something new! This is so great! And very creative! (no, I'm not a Red Vampire trying to suck you dry of your creativity), but I'd love to be able to write like this! Keep it up! And hope you finish Of Dragons and Angels soon!

I can't believe Rosie-girl is the only one who's reviewed so far! Girl, you rock! I'm with Rose on this though (by the way...were you inspired by RoseFire for Rose in the story?) But, I'd love to see a Sunni and Gusto story (if you don't, I'm all for Rosie writing one! Go for it!)

Sweet

I read this earlier this morning, but had to leave before I could write a review, so I'll do so now.

This was so great! I absolutely adored it! Any chance you *might* write a Gusto & Sunni romance? _~ Love to see one one of these days (maybe I'll write one)

You are a wonderful writer and I congratulate you on all your success!

Stay cool Soultra (and everyone)! From here on in, this will be fun! _~