Oh no... Poor Nico! Damn it... This is dark as hell! Well written too! I can only wonder what's going on in his mind after darkness took free reign.

So, what happens next?

I love the idea of Nico being a cold-blooded killer inside.

along with Will's death...

damn.

Oh. My. God. This is amazing and really well written and the ending is so very chilling. I love this so so much and I think you really captured Nico's character and mindset here. Thanks for writing!

Ahhh, no! Why must you make it so? You're a terrible person!(jk! You're an amazing writer) but you killed Will and kinda killed Nico too :o

...There is something wrong with Nico so nicely should be illegal or something...

You are killing me. Slowly. Painfully. I hate you (of course I don't, but Nico . . . Why?)

yoooooooooo this is AMAZING
-Beebo

Wow, I really love this. Very dark and foreboding. Truly kept me engaged and on the edge of my seat. It was sad when Will died towards the end. Good job, keep writing. Your doing fabulous! :)

ANGST! AHHHHH WHY KILL WILL? NO! Liked it, short and sad.

omg plz have the camp react

I could read this 100,000,000 times and never get tired of it!

... I feel like crying! Is this an OC, or are there more chapters? I'm following in case there are.