I love this Mother and Son relationship so much. It brings tears to my eyes, I love this story.

Woohoo! Oh, man. That was perfect backround for my son Zuko. Great job, great writing. That was really good. :)

I'm drinking in the Girl-Girl solidarity in this. So refreshing and awesome. So many times writers pit women against each other, and I just loved the scene where she gives her tea and helps her out.

I'm crying, this was freaking beautiful and amazing

This was perfect! No, Genius! Nooo, FANTASTIC! No, UHHHAZIIINGGG!

Powerful and intelligent writing. I was completely drawn with the very first lines, 'Her shaky breath echoed off the silent walls, limbs frozen in fear.' The narrative is evocative and tense throughout, without losing its sensitivity to the topic. Truly an accomplishment and testimony to your skill as a writer. -S.

Wow. This is impressive.

very good character study. I'm going to put this one in my community list. Please let me know if you've got any objection!

Whoa, dude. That was some pretty deep stuff there. But nonetheless, it was fantastic. Not only showed a deeper part of characters we don't see much of (or at least, don't see their personalities really shine through), which made me incredibly happy, but also weren't afraid to go on to the dark side of the characters. I don't know why o wasn't expecting this, since you haven't been afraid to do such a thing in times passed. But really, terrific job on this! Beautiful writing, very interesting plot, and also some great insight to these characters. I was very, very pleased! Thank you so very much!

Have a blessed day!

I love this! So good!

Nice. I like it.

Words do not describe how amazing I think this is