Should be quite a ride with another timelord along. Especially one with an unknown past.

Just because she helped the Master does not mean that she shares all his views about the universe.

So her real name is Adelaide. The big question is why did she hide herself away, and from whom?

I personally its more likely the Master notices first. What if Caroline is Missy? That would be bad.

How will they handle the transformative nature of The Waters of Mars? Still waiting for the watch.

I agree with Hainako. I've made comments before.

This was brill!
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LOVED IT!

Nothing is changed. So the character was there for romance only? What is the point...

Again, you tend to have her just there, not really doing anything or changing anything but, again, I am hoping that this will change in the next story.

Also, Adelaide is short for something, right? 'Cause Time Lords/Lady's usually have weird, non-human names and Adelaide is well, pretty human.

Finally- spelling mistakes, I found a lot more than I expected. Just small things where you wrote the wrong word or misplaced a letter so nothing major, but I thought I would tell ya.

Also, sorry if ya think I'm hating your anything 'cause I'm not. I do think you are a good writer, you just need to learn to make your OC more active or change the original story a little more than you are. Again, not hating, just constructive criticism, 'cause, ya know; someone's gotta do it.

ALSO aligned is your version of mated/bonded right? That's so adorable. But Ima bet there's a process to it right? So they're gonna have to go through a whole season to do it right? (Secretly hopes soon so time lord babies show up, but obviously that ain't gonna happen for a while )

I REALLY don't know how I feel about how the doctor first reacts to her cause like, yea she ran and stuff but so did you, your whole stick is that 'ooh I'm a madman in a box that ran all those years ago', and just cause she ran doesn't mean if she didn't they would've won, that's the cliche 'oh blame it on someone cause I'm too miffed to say that I didn't do it myself'

God I swear if the doctor is mad at Adelaide for running I'll punch that hypocrite in the face, don't worry about wilf knocking 4 times, I'll do that on his face

Oh god I seriously hope Adelaide isn't left on earth just for the doctor to regenerate and then her show up at Amy's just cause..

Also I hope they get together soon cause ugh now she's finally out of the watch they should really talk it out BUT NO NOW HES GONNA REGENERATE UGH

Loved this chapter! Do the Doctor and Adelaide have anything to do with what the Master mentioned? Maybe being Aligned?

Finally! But also sad. The Doctor finally admits his feelings, only for them to get wrenched apart. Here's hoping it's not for nothing (the admission). Am really curious to learn about Adelaide. Even more curious about the little teaser you had The Master drop about her and The Doctor being Aligned. Hmmmm. I have to say, I do really like the timing of Adelaide coming out just as we're about to get a new regeneration of The Doctor...bit of a fresh start for both of them. I'm not entirely sure Caroline would have done well to have a suddenly new man with her. Especially considering the outward behavior differences between 10 and 11. Vivacious 11 may have completely overwhelmed her shy nature. Really looking forward to seeing how things progress between them. AND considering what you've dropped about her past, how Rassilon and the other Time Lords respond to her presence. Looking forward to next time! Keep up the great work!