I am a huge fan of Star Wars as well as a fan of Star Trek. ‘Lady Luck’ is the name of Lando Calrissian’s ship in many of the EU books. If that was coincidental then that is amazing. If not, I am still happy that you included a Star Wars reference.

So good! I absolutely LOVED it! Awesome job! You definitely got into Jim's head, which is no easy feat. I look forward to more from you!

Great story! And, I'm glad that you gave this "Romulan Commander" a happier ending, while keeping Ael and Tafv here as well!

DO NOT give up on the series; sometimes the Muses *test* one's determination with trials!

Keep up the GREAT work, please!

I thought Jim had handed over his weapon?
"Weapons," one of the two blocking her said.
Di'On handed hers over without protest, glanced at Jim. Grim-faced, Jim complied as well, and his crew reluctantly followed his lead.

I like the 'shield-arm of old' concept, very Beowulf!

Loved this chapter though it actually is just preparatory. I'm very eager to see how those 5 days pass by with the President if the Federation onboard. I appreciate the quick update and would love if it happened again;)

Love it! Update soon...

Great start! But, you'd *think* that Jim Kirk has grown-up at least a little bit more since the Elders had crossed over ...

And, will Kirk Prime be on this mission as well?

Keep up the great work, I'd been worried by the long hiatus, please!

Oooooo I like it! I can't wait to see what you do with it!