worst chapter yet, hate the weird oc summons, poorly explained so it's hard to follow, or picture theme

The story as a whole has been enjoyable, 8/10. However I don’t see myself waiting for the next chapter, too many errors and too long a wait.

You really need an editor for this story. The grammatical errors don’t make this story unreadable, but they do detract from the enjoyment of reading it. And to put it plainly, there are a lot of them.

damn ,sad to see him go without a bang.

Today seems to be a day where great stories get updated. Glad to see you have not abandoned what is definitively a fantastic story. I look forward to another chapter soon.

I'm glad to see this story update, I was starting to worry it had died. Forgot how good this is as well. Look forward to more.

Kakuzu might just pay for silencing Hiden .Especially if sees that he sees that Hiden silence is golden .

Well hell, I certainly hope that Kakashi gets out of this. It would suck if he died and I'm BEYOND tires of super ROOT nins and Danzo always getting his way.

That was epic just found the first part of this story a week ago and whenever I got a chance I was reading now I'm reviewing for the first time so just saying love your stories and your awesome:)

Please keep writing. The story here is better than many I have read.

Love the story. You are a fantastic writes... please update

I hope Kakashi stays alive. And it would be interesting to see how team ten and especially Shikamaru reacts to death.
Great story. You are a great writer!

Wow. Sasuke sure has become a great conversationalist while he was trapped underground with a snake and a medic for the last three years. And to think, just a few chapters ago he was a raving psychopath who was killing everyone in his way in fits of insanity. Just look at him now, pulling the smooth act and trying to mind-game Naruto, Kabuto, and Orochimaru all in one day. He was even nice to Sakura! Truly, he has gone through some serious character development to reach this stage! What character development? Oh, you know, the one where you said he was a raving lunatic and then turned him into Hannibal Lector as far a speech mannerisms in the next chapter.
Suddenly no one can handle Sharingan genjutsu either, which is interesting if you consider Naruto and Sakura have trained for the explicit purpose of beating the shit out of Sasuke. But who cares, right? Hell, Sasuke even slipped a Shadow Clone past a fully alert Naruto, who's new sensing range is according to your own words, fucking ridiculous. And with everything else, Orochimaru just straight up let them walk themselves out of his base. Didn't do a damn thing to stop them.
I understand writing in a coherent manner and including character development over time isn't as much fun as just throwing in whatever details you feel will make the story edgier, but I assure you, the story just reads better if you actually think through the details before you write them down and post them.

Sudden revelations of psychosis seems to be your go-to method of making tension in this story.

Great story. I was thinking Naruto would save either of the two (team 10 or Kakashi) but not both. Per the root convo they want to capture Kakashi...so he lives and Naruto saves team 10, but someone still dies?