Dude you are SERIOUSLY good at it u should get paid to do this

Good

For the love of God, just go with Ruby. It'll be like betraying her, I wouldn't do that if I was in his position tbh.

Welp, this story went downhill fast.

Oh no, why does he have to tell them? Can't it just be a secret.

Only problem with this story, Jeff Williams can't exist in the RWBY universe because his name is not related to a color. Have a nice day and happy pride month.

FINALLY A N EW CHAPTER. this story is the one who had originally brought me to fanfiction to begin with

This is the best time travel fic I ever read! Please update, man!

So I saw this one a while back and was hesitant at first for some reason. But I'm glad I started it, I really need the levity, and I admit I may or may not enjoy both Arkos and Lancaster.

I keep thinking Razor's as a Grimm version of Yakon from Dbz Buu saga

“End of Chapter 1.”

Me: ... Wait, that was still chapter one?! WTF I THOUGHT I WAS ON 10 OR SOMETHING.

Glad to see you’re updating again, I thought that you had abandoned this story or god forbid something happened to you but I’m happy to know you are ok. This chapter was great, the new weapon upgrades are so fucking badass but could you expand on the rune concept? Lastly what is the difference between runes and glyphs? You said that some runes translated into glyphs but what exactly is the difference?

It's awesome to see another update to this story!

And what a chapter that was!
I loved every bit of it.

Personally I don't complain about the length, it allowed me to enjoy reading this chapter bit by bit along the days, which was amazing!

Also, congrats on your Grimm number. The fact that you made more than 2000 is staggering, I can't wait to see them appear in the story proper!

Until next time!

When is the next chapter of the “Ultimate Maken” story coming out!?

You definitely have the creativity for this.

I do hope Rose Gold happens. A stressed and sad Pyrrha is no good. Now that Ruby knows, there may be hope.