Hey man. This fabric is incredible, and I am dying to see what happens. Please don't let this die

Such a good story hoping for an awesome conclusion. More cute starco please

There are so many theories regarding the direction this story is going. I hope to find out where this has been leading sometime soon.

This is such a good read! I hope you’re doing well; i’m very hopeful for the next chapter! :)

its so sweet please dont make it bad I swear to God if star does something or marco does something and they get edgy, i will be mildly dissapointed

was he about to say yip yip

I love your story. Cant wait for the next chapter!

But this chapter ended in such a high note. Why does it have to be broken next chapter :(

This dream demon must be powerful if it managed to turn the nightmare back at Star.

As for the next chapter, I can already tell why star abuses the spell. Since Marco won't remember anything, she can kiss Marco without repercussions - when she can pretty much succeed on that in the real world. I want to see how she gets out of this situation.

My heart hurts for these dorks. Hopefully they can take down this dream demon and just be able to live their lives with each other. Great chapter, you make the drama and feelings feel so believable.

wow! three kisses in a chapter xD that was a record hahaha I love how you write

Star must had realized something by now,and Marco does he even know?

I read this all. I tried rereading it and nothing comes to mind. Well let me reread from the beginning!

Hi, sorry this review is so late, but I stopped checking for updates in, like, July, because I figured you abandoned this. Luckily, I keep a list of my favorite fanfics, and I just happened to check today and see that you updated and...wow. Your writing is beautiful, and I don't use that word often in reviews.

I tend to gravitate towards stories that have a sense of realism, that make really feel like these characters are alive. Not just some character stand in.
And then this story just takes what I love about fanfiction and absolutely ignites that beautiful little spark of personal creativity that melts me. Love the story. Love your characterization.
Love Star vs.

I have reread this twice this story is so much better then the show.