I’m a little late to the Lucifer game, but that’s fine, because I CAN’T IMAGINE having to wait for updates to this fic! Man, do you nail their voices & the tone of the whole show. Those pure Lucifer snarky quips... Ugh, perfection. You plot like a pro. You are DAMN good. 3

What a well rounded story! I can’t say which option I like better, both are good and it really doesn’t matter if Lucifer turns out human or not. Well done!

Love it, but please check your Latin.
What you have copied translates to “we are asking for forgiveness” and not the imperative form.
Pete veniam would be better or roge veniam. The verb rogare implies “to beg on your knees” and is much stronger.

So far I like the story, building up nicely. Nonetheless, as having been to a Catholic middle school, the title Sister for a nun isn’t Hermana but Sor. Also, the sisters use the title with the first name of their choosing and not the given or family name. In case of Lucifer, being terribly formal, he’d probably use the Usted instead of the informal tú. (Even if he doesn’t with Chloe in the show.)

loved your story. I've only recently discovered Lucifer and this is a great AU to it. thanks for posting it.

Extremely well done. Plot development and pacing were outstanding. In addition, each character was given something to do and were in character.

Af for the endings, I actually liked the second one better. The original one had more impact but ruins the character IMO. He just isn't as interesting as a regular guy.

Thanks for sharing this.

This is one of my favourite fanfics as its not just mindless sex but it builds up character

OMG I AM SHITTING AT THE CLIFFHANGER, great writing, the world needs more authors like you!

Outstanding story! I greatly enjoyed all of it.

Both endings were very good, though I preferred the first one.

This has been incredibly intense! I'm anxious and eager to read the next chapter. What a spectacular journey!

Thanks for this amazing fic, I really enjoyed it! I personally prefered the first version of the end but both were great.

Poor Lucifer! He didnt expect to become a father himself, but he vil be good at it.

This was an absolutely fantastic ride. I'm astounded by your ability to really delve into the minds and represent the characters flawlessly. This read like an actual episode - full of the light teasing, funny banter, drama, well-planned mystery, *romance,* sexual tension, and feel-good friend and family vibes. I love how you explored and portrayed the emotional / supernatural connection between Lucifer and Chloe, and especially impressed with how you wrote God as a character. Loved ever time Lucifer played a song and how you wrapped everything up with hints and clues from the beginning. Everything was so fitting and an absolute pleasure to read. Truly tugged at the heart strings!

I can't decide which ending I like more honestly - I enjoyed your original ending immensely since it was the plan and what everything lead up to. Very satisfying. Plus, the dialogue was perfect. The alternate was great as well - and it's nice we still have the supernatural in him. Regardless, I enjoyed both and appreciated you did 2 versions!

Thank you for the fantastic read. You are an amazing writer.

I feel like Ella would know that it's Yin and Yang not Yan and Ying.

Slightly misheard lyrics on that first verse. Google says it's this

"Now this mountain I must climb, feels like the world upon my shoulders
Through the clouds I see love shine, it keeps me warm as life grows colder"