It is a shame you have abandoned this story it was really good.

Story was pretty good until this point... but adding a second time traveler ruins it, especially if it's Revan you're throwing in.

Really enjoyed it so far. I do hope you ate ableto come back to it some day.

It's a very good story!When is the collisions?

This has mad my day reading this. Thank you!

I know the scenes that would have shown it were left out of the movies, but they were still in the novelizations, Padme had a close relationship with her family. But you've mentioned 2 or 3 times in this that she doesn't.

That's my only quibble, otherwise interesting story.

What will be truly interesting is when Revan finally runs into Padme while she is alone. She knows how to give an incredible argument when she wants to, add in her determination and courage, and Revan just might begin to see things HER way! Won't THAT put a kink in the plans of Palpypie?

ok I'm hooked. Revan is my all time favorite sw character and the idea of him being in the clone wars is awesome. but revan wasn't straight sith. he wasn't straight jedi either. he walked the line between the two with a leg in both camps. he was a grey, he found the true meaning of power in the force but 99% of all jedi are so close minded that they call him a sith without understanding what he really is.

I'm excited to see where this goes!

I have to admit, the only reason I'm reviewing this chapter is because of the lack of reviews it has received so far (only one other in the two days since posting). TBH, I feel out of my depth here since I know next to nothing about KOTOR, and I can only imagine how many other readers might feel the same way.

I also didn't expect that you would actually make it so that Anakin wasn't Padmé's first lover in the OTL. But, TBH, I think the absence of an explicit love scene in this chapter did more harm than you feel including it would have.

who's to say that revan wasn't a chosen one? I personally think he was. he spent his entire adult life doing what he thought was best for the galaxy. he brought balance not only to the force, but also himself if you look at his philosophy. anyways, off my soap box. loved this chapter!

This is really good so far! Can't wait to see what happens next.

very cool

You're welcome, and thanks for your response to my review. You did message me a long while ago in order to answer my question and I know it won't be a polyamorous relationship.

Thanks again, happy writing, and have a very good day.

Not really sure about the whole Revanites thing if I am to be honest. I'm willing to give it a shot and see how it goes