So awesome hope you continue to update. So it looks like I reviewed the 3rd chapter but I don't remember what I said so I'll do it here ..

pleas update because I am bored of boring fanfics not to insult others but you have one of the best to me

lol, great job so far

aww

interesting

I love how you write Ashley and made him bisexual because not a lot writers will write a character as bi or pan. Usually they just stick to straight, lesbian, or gay; while I don't have a problem with that I do wish they would use bi, pan, or ace. It's very rare that I find a decently written one with either of those, so this makes me very happy.

Please update the story it's amazing

this is amazing really tho I hope that you can continue this

I really enjoyed how this story was going I wish u would continue it

This looks interesting ,I like the fact that Ash is feminine and bisexual

I think Ash should pair up with Misty.

Ashley is going to be a heart breaker, mainly breaking because the guy or girl smitten with him will be either heading somewhere else or staying at their home or job , he's also going to be getting a huge fanclub over time.
I wonder how Misty's gay sisters will react to when he shows up for a gym battle? Will one or both try flirting with him before they find out that he's a he?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh I forgot to put this in the 1st review, Ashley reminds me of a Ralts , the male's look more girly each time they evolve.
Giovanni!? That's who Ashley's mysterious father is!? What a shocker. :) This is turning out to be a great story!
HAHAHA! , Well that completely flipped that trio around. My first thought was that they were going to be sent to kidnap Ashley and his father was going to treat him like he's made of glass by locking him up somewhere to be safe or something.
Ooh what about Brock? Will he start flirting with Ashley until he finds out that he's a boy and not a girl?
Well this will have a fun father and son confrontation later on. But who knows how this will turn out. Keep going on this story Piro-san, you've got a unique and wonderful story here. I love it!

Well this will be an interesting story. I'll be looking forward to when you post the 4th one and the rest of the chapters.

I like how that Ash is now cute, I really want to see Ash get mobbed because of how cute he is or maybe have him cosplay or something, I really like this story and would like to see you develop it even more.